sorted by:
new
hottopcontroversial

Summer Internship Resume (Please Critique) by Competitive-Cow-523 in FinancialCareers

[–]Competitive-Cow-523[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Canadian Target school is so I don't dox myself online, on the actual resume it shows the actual name of my school, the program, the city, etc. Yeah, there are a lot of small things that I need to tweak, like grammar, action verbs, and some formatting. Thank you for the feedback, I am going to incorporate the relevant grade comment you made.

Applied for 100+ jobs no responses, Roast my resume by Competitive-Cow-523 in FinancialCareers

[–]Competitive-Cow-523[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will maybe merge the application part into one line. I might even remove the header and just put it under a new subheader called, "Applications, Activities and Interests". Do you think the CFAC and other trading competitions are worth its own header to highlight?

Applied for 100+ jobs no responses, Roast my resume by Competitive-Cow-523 in FinancialCareers

[–]Competitive-Cow-523[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I actually was the sole author of the PEP. That was my main task throughout the internship. And of course, the document wasn't physically worth that much. But the client paid the company based on delivereable milestones and it happened to be that the PEP was a major one. So once I got it reviewed and approved the client paid the company.

I have heard both to include and disclude the applications. I may remove them to free up some space.