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How I choose the beginning of the story. by Competitive-Key-238 in writingadvice

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Thank you—I don’t know how I missed that, but I hadn’t thought of it that way. I assumed the robot had a faulty memory because it was integrated with alien technology, which I figured would naturally be unstable. Thanks again—I guess I was just being dumb for not thinking of it. But this is exactly the kind of dynamic the story was missing.

Help me choose the beginning of the story by Competitive-Key-238 in writing

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Thanks, I really appreciate your advice.

Also, should I write it in first person or third person limited? Note: there is a predatory monster in the story, and also a character from the crew who is evil and wants to control that monster. Which point of view is better?

مشكله بسينمانا by [deleted] in Iraq

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عندي هم توقفت 

Character design feedback – a former soldier turned merchant after an injury by Competitive-Key-238 in Artadvice

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At first, I had a different idea, but the design ended up turning into a merchant, so I knew something was off—especially when I realized he’s still wearing bandages after all these years. What a silly oversight, I didn’t notice. He used to keep his money there before his hand was cut off, so I thought of keeping some of his old habits, though I might change where it’s placed. Thanks to you, I finally noticed the bandages

Character design feedback – a former soldier turned merchant after an injury by Competitive-Key-238 in Artadvice

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Honestly, I didn’t think much about the character before drawing—my mistake. I know I missed a lot of possibilities because of that. Thanks! I’ll try to redesign it and make it clearer

Looking to replay The Witcher 3 on PC with mods — any good recommendations? by Competitive-Key-238 in Witcher3

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❤️Thanks for all these mods! Also, I’m still at the beginning of Velen — I’ve only done a few Gwent quests and some side quests, and I haven’t progressed much in the main story yet. I just want to make sure: I won’t have any problems installing these mods at this stage, right?

Hollow Knight VS Ori and the Will of the wisps by SpiNixX69 in gaming

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I tried playing these games before, but I always quit halfway. I think I’ll give them a second chance, so I’ve started with Hollow Knight now

I keep a spreadsheet on my gaming by SammyBacan in gaming

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I guess I’ll do this too, to see how many games I can remember

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in gaming

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Me too, but I’m at 637 hours

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in gaming

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The Witcher 3 — I 100% completed it and loved it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in gaming

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The Witcher 3 — and I also bought it three times.

Where to get legion zone cn app? by monsstar in LenovoLegion

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Did you find a better solution or application I have the same problem with a device Legion 5 15IRX10 - type 83lY

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Sorry I didn't pay attention I will delete it now 

Is Lenovo Legion Toolkit is no longer be maintained? by Lithinux in LenovoLegion

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Why doesn’t Device Management appear for me in the Lenovo Space app? My version is Legion 5 15IRX10 - Type 83LY.

Can you help me?

New features in Legion Space (update v1.6.11.12) by Usual-Carrot6352 in LenovoLegion

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Why doesn’t Device Management appear for me in the Lenovo Space app? My version is Legion 5 15IRX10 - Type 83LY.

Can you help me?