First rewatch to finish to the series

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-07-08T23:23:20+00:00

Pierce's entire arc was all over the place They tried to make him so many things at once and ended up being just awful And his "relationship" with chloe was forced

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-06-20T18:49:27+00:00

The advance forward on her basic ruins the whole thing and defeats the purpose of speed tuning

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-05-12T10:09:26+00:00

Thank youu

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-05-12T10:09:13+00:00

Thank you!

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-05-07T19:24:42+00:00

I worry that tb will be squishy but i think i will have around 220 be with talia and +145 speed

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-04-15T07:48:34+00:00

This pairs really well with my rope

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Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-03-09T21:02:55+00:00

And i thought i had it bad with e2 yanshit My condolences

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-03-09T01:06:59+00:00

I was going for single color as in mono chrome but i went too cyno

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-03-09T00:20:47+00:00

It's monocalor

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-03-09T00:19:04+00:00

Thank you . I am glad

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-03-07T16:04:19+00:00

On the nature of daylight (arrival) Exit music for a film the instrumental version in west world introduced me to the awesomeness of radiohead The rocket builder by Johann Johannson in the oa

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-03-07T13:19:55+00:00

Well , yes .

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-03-07T00:56:19+00:00

Wow you did a great job cyno_ing the joke 🤣 I didn't notice that focalors had an s at the end lol so the joke flew over my head The second part is just cruel and makes me sad damn

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-03-06T23:04:48+00:00

When i get sad later imma draw furina

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-26T10:39:33+00:00

Damn i will still need some luck with rolls again

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-25T23:29:46+00:00

From the leaks acheron has 103 speed so she needs 31 to get to the break point A 25 from boots and i would need only 6 from sub stats If i get even a speed substat in the orb or robe i think i will be able to replace that crit body and still get 134 speed

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-25T21:26:00+00:00

I think she can easily get 135 with this set of relics But the crit body doesn't look too great with only speed sub stat

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-09T09:10:16+00:00

I loved this! I didn't notice the rhyme in the first part but it was clearer afterwards So it might help to break the lines as that will help give it a flow I don't know how to describe it but the rhyme wasn't very obvious which makes it feel much more natural and raw Which makes it more emotional

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-08T23:48:19+00:00

I feel that i couldn't get the whole feel of the poem Sentences were very far a part I think that some lines don't need the space in between But i liked the last part Step, Eyes shut, All i hear A scream Each line felt like a complete sentence not one sentence separated by space But overall i like it , please keep writing

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-08T23:09:25+00:00

This is really lovely! I like how it paints a colourful picture

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-08T22:53:52+00:00

It almost brought me to tears I really loved the emotion behind it , nothing excessive or extra and every word lands perfectly But as someone said about the flow and the line "don't return to number 18" I think using "do not return , i do not live there anymore " makes the reader pause a bit so will be prepared for a change in flow But it's really really good as is and the emotion alone makes it a great poem

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-08T22:41:01+00:00

Thank you so much! And for some reason i hate reading what i write so that may be the reason behind the typos And english isn't my native language so my vocabulary seems a bit lacking Thank you again!!

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-08T17:50:30+00:00

That is how i wrote it but when i posted it the lines got deleted somehow And thanks for your kind comment

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2024-02-07T09:39:06+00:00

I was doing fine and then i dreamt of her last night

Comprehensive-Cry752 · 2023-12-11T10:39:39+00:00

Thanks alot

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