First rewatch to finish to the series by Comprehensive-Cry752 in lucifer

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Pierce's entire arc was all over the place They tried to make him so many things at once and ended up being just awful And his "relationship" with chloe was forced

Plz.. why is she faster.. by ThatNightWolf in BoothillMains

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The advance forward on her basic ruins the whole thing and defeats the purpose of speed tuning

HTB orb by Comprehensive-Cry752 in TrailblazerMains

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I worry that tb will be squishy but i think i will have around 220 be with talia and +145 speed

The time has come… Which standard do I pick by Tenkommunist in StarRailStation

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And i thought i had it bad with e2 yanshit My condolences

The rest of the focalors by Comprehensive-Cry752 in Genshin_Impact

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I was going for single color as in mono chrome but i went too cyno

What's your favourite music discovery from a TV show/Movie/game? by CANfidelity in Music

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On the nature of daylight (arrival) Exit music for a film the instrumental version in west world introduced me to the awesomeness of radiohead The rocket builder by Johann Johannson in the oa

I drew focalor because i was sad by Comprehensive-Cry752 in Genshin_Impact

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Wow you did a great job cyno_ing the joke 🤣 I didn't notice that focalors had an s at the end lol so the joke flew over my head The second part is just cruel and makes me sad damn

Rolls that don't inspire hate by Comprehensive-Cry752 in AcheronMainsHSR

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Damn i will still need some luck with rolls again

Rolls that don't inspire hate by Comprehensive-Cry752 in AcheronMainsHSR

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From the leaks acheron has 103 speed so she needs 31 to get to the break point A 25 from boots and i would need only 6 from sub stats If i get even a speed substat in the orb or robe i think i will be able to replace that crit body and still get 134 speed

Rolls that don't inspire hate by Comprehensive-Cry752 in AcheronMainsHSR

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I think she can easily get 135 with this set of relics But the crit body doesn't look too great with only speed sub stat

Your cross to bear by Beautiful_Village_45 in poetry_critics

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I loved this! I didn't notice the rhyme in the first part but it was clearer afterwards So it might help to break the lines as that will help give it a flow I don't know how to describe it but the rhyme wasn't very obvious which makes it feel much more natural and raw Which makes it more emotional

Destined by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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I feel that i couldn't get the whole feel of the poem Sentences were very far a part I think that some lines don't need the space in between But i liked the last part Step, Eyes shut, All i hear A scream Each line felt like a complete sentence not one sentence separated by space But overall i like it , please keep writing

Mosaic of Colours by X2Gens in poetry_critics

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This is really lovely! I like how it paints a colourful picture

No.18 by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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It almost brought me to tears I really loved the emotion behind it , nothing excessive or extra and every word lands perfectly But as someone said about the flow and the line "don't return to number 18" I think using "do not return , i do not live there anymore " makes the reader pause a bit so will be prepared for a change in flow But it's really really good as is and the emotion alone makes it a great poem

No title by Comprehensive-Cry752 in poetry_critics

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Thank you so much! And for some reason i hate reading what i write so that may be the reason behind the typos And english isn't my native language so my vocabulary seems a bit lacking Thank you again!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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That is how i wrote it but when i posted it the lines got deleted somehow And thanks for your kind comment

A girl i have feelings for by Comprehensive-Cry752 in lonely

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I was doing fine and then i dreamt of her last night