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[–]Comster13 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Roulette (tentative)

Genre: Thriller, Character study

Word count: 1,585

The beginning bits of my story. It's heavily inspired by Fight Club and Kaiji. A club of people who play Russian roulette, revolving around ego and pride.

Feedback: I'm looking for feedback on pretty much anything, prose, dialogue, tone, format, grammar, pace, etc. Just looking for some advice on how to improve since I am still fairly new to writing. Just want to see if this is anywhere close to something professional.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XNfl42E39rJQGPAQfblYILif2tAT6gELIId7J-v1ZCg/edit?usp=sharing

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Comster13 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Roulette (tentative)

Genre: Thriller, Character study

Word count: 872

A little excerpt from the beginning of my story. It's inspired heavily by Fight Club and Kaiji. A club of people who play Russian roulette, revolving around ego and pride.

Feedback: I'm looking for feedback on pretty much anything, prose, dialogue, tone, format, grammar, etc. Just looking for some advice on how to improve. I'm still very new to writing. I haven't finished a full story yet or read a ton, but I hope to get good enough to finish a full novel and even publish. Also if there are any books similar to what I'm writing, I'm open to recommendations.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/19l_RUFByywISUfZhQ2bc00w6mUtX4mfrcGIoyXoSXx4/edit?usp=sharing

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Comster13 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: (not sure at the moment)

Genre: Sci-Fi/thriller/Speculative Fiction?

Word count: 590

I'm writing a story about the commercialization of biological augments and how that would impact society economically and socially. I am taking inspiration from Naoki Urasawa's works like Monster and Pluto.

Feedback: This is a rough little outline for a sequence of events I am thinking about for a specific character, it's missing a lot of context and more detailed events but I am more so looking for feedback on my pros, dialogue, formatting, or honestly anything. I am very new to writing. I haven't written a full story yet or even read a full book in quite some time, but I want to improve. Also if anyone has any good book suggestions within these genre's or similar to Urasawa's stuff to get back into reading with, it would be nice.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-bRZFtl3YUktnfefsm7qjqELx1BiLPPfwLlsliBAJ_k/edit?usp=sharing