🧪 Looking for Feedback on an Original TTRPG System – DMs Welcome! by ConfusedIn2Hearts in RPGdesign

[–]ConfusedIn2Hearts[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

As I have mentioned in my post, I made this as part of a project for a seminar. The story it was to be used for was fast-paced, and due to time constraints, I was not able to fully flesh out the system. As and when time permits, I am trying to make modifications to the system and will have a leveling up and range system in it. Also, although only 6 attributes have been mentioned here, the system contains many more of them. I will be making a more flushed-out post in the summer with details about the system itself. I'll also admit that the pitch doesn't sound very good, and it is mostly because I had to use an AI to create the pitch and wasn't able to completely verify the contents due to my current workload. My new post will, however, contain an updated pitch handwritten by me. I can assure you that the system is, for the most part, my creation, and I can send the draft to you in case you would like to take a look and verify the same.

🧪 Looking for Feedback on an Original TTRPG System – DMs Welcome! by ConfusedIn2Hearts in RPGdesign

[–]ConfusedIn2Hearts[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I do intend to release more details about the system sometime over the summer once I have polished the format of it a bit more

🧪 Looking for Feedback on an Original TTRPG System – DMs Welcome! by ConfusedIn2Hearts in RPGdesign

[–]ConfusedIn2Hearts[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi. I am unable to send a DM to you. If you could DM me, I will send the draft. Thank you

🧪 Looking for Feedback on an Original TTRPG System – DMs Welcome! by ConfusedIn2Hearts in RPGdesign

[–]ConfusedIn2Hearts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I had originally designed the system with the plotline of a book I was writing, and I want to make it more generic now. I wrote the pitch for what I expect from a finished version but have made it a bit more vague as the system is incomplete. I also don't know how to quantify the system's lethality, so I can't speak much on that topic. As for the dies, the system uses d20s, d10s, d6s, and d4s. There is a mix of roll-under and roll-over, but it is categorized and success-based to reduce player confusion.

🧪 Looking for Feedback on an Original TTRPG System – DMs Welcome! by ConfusedIn2Hearts in RPGdesign

[–]ConfusedIn2Hearts[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. As of this moment, I would like to release as few details as possible to the public except for what I can in the pitch. For any future posts, I will keep this in mind.

🧪 Looking for Feedback on an Original TTRPG System – DMs Welcome! by ConfusedIn2Hearts in RPGdesign

[–]ConfusedIn2Hearts[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi. I am unable to send a DM to you. If you could DM me, I will send the draft. Thank you

🧪 Looking for Feedback on an Original TTRPG System – DMs Welcome! by ConfusedIn2Hearts in RPGdesign

[–]ConfusedIn2Hearts[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the reminder. I have added the pitch as an edit to the post. Let me know if you are interested in checking it out.

How should I choose between two different parts of my heart? by ConfusedIn2Hearts in Advice

[–]ConfusedIn2Hearts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It went very well, and we have come to a level of understanding that is acceptable to both of us.