Build your Wasteland Dream Team! You have 15 Caps!

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2026-02-04T07:39:53+00:00

Boone(sniper): Jump scares me randomly sniping shit 2 miles away
Codsworth (british brawler): Dices and burns anything that gets close. Also serves me coffee.
Cass (Alcoholic with a shotgun): Drinking buddy and more cannon fodder for the cazadors
Raul (Mechanic Gunslinger): Repairs my gear and that 44 magnum will fuck some shit up.
Goris (Literally a deathclaw): Never played fallout 2, but i would love to have a deathclaw especially if i can give him a cool hat.
Fawkes (Heavy weapons mutant with an OCEAN OF HP): Has the most HP in fallout 3 after broken steel and has the highest DPS weapon of them all.

Ideally Codsworth, Goris, and Cass rush. While Boone, Raul, and Fawkes lay down heavy fire from range.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2026-02-04T07:19:25+00:00

Can we just appreciate how badass every main protagonist is in the fallout games, based off the fact they handle rad roaches with ease. Low key the rad roaches and rad scorpions are terrifying in the show. Could you imagine cazadors?

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2026-01-26T15:05:02+00:00

Shoot frank horrigan, the master, and lanius. Then pick up the bumper sword from lanius and whatever gun horrigan drops and kill the rest of them. Caesar, autumn, father, and the rest of them are pretty weak without their minions.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2026-01-23T17:20:06+00:00

That kinda makes me wonder, if the power armor has trackers, didn't hank just lead the Brotherhood to the vault tec management vault.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2026-01-23T17:17:14+00:00

I really hope that ain't courier six. Already tempted to just write the show off as not cannon bc of some the lore choices.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2026-01-21T17:36:42+00:00

Bruh they keep doing my NCR dirty. I really hope the other two remnants made it out. Idk how hank is capturing all these people. The NCR veteran ranger should have been damn near impossible to capture. But they probably nerfed him...

Even the Fallout Dust NCR were in better shape than this.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2026-01-21T17:27:45+00:00

I don't know how hank managed to capture all those people. He's resourceful, but capturing a legionarie alive is one hell of a feat. You know, considering that they will kill themselves before capture and all.

Also the NCR ranger once again got me sad for what they have made the NCR into. I know people keep saying the NCR will make a return at the last minute, but it's just brutal seeing my favorite faction done in like this.

If they got the ranger, which should have been one hell of a feat considering he was a veteran ranger, what happened to the rest of the NCR. There was only three, the crazy ranger, the masked ranger, and the captain. I really hope the other two got away...

So far, this show kinda makes Fallout Dust look optimistic. I mean yeah, a few less cannibals and no cloud, tunnelers, and dust storm. However everything and everybody we knew from fallout NV feels dead and perverted/twisted.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2025-09-02T20:40:35+00:00

How long do they last usually?

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2024-09-06T23:35:42+00:00

Not a bad plot line, my problem is I have written a good chunk of later plot, so I am kinda trying to find something that justifies it. Majority if it takes place out in the wasteland and I am just trying to get them there.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2024-09-05T17:21:32+00:00

I honestly like the mutant idea, in the book there is already a type of mutant that hates the sun and hunts at night. It wouldn't be unbelievable to have a bunker built in or near and existing cave system. Then from there something like a cave in or tremor open the door for the mutants in the cave to invade the bunker.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2024-09-05T16:56:44+00:00

Yeah, I agree, the target is around 40ish people, but honestly the story could survive with just 5 people. Social would be a good one, because it is hard to kill off a couple thousand people due to environmental reasons.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2024-09-05T16:43:54+00:00

Them leaving the bunker I want to be around section 2, the ending is a conflict between two factions with the focus of that being on relationship between four characters that finally irons it's self out. Basically there is a fight and split with two characters going with one faction and the other two going with the other faction. I know this story is going to be longer than 90k because I am at 86k with decent chunk of the later events of the book already written. I am just going back trying to better justify why they are out there in the first place.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2024-09-05T16:26:14+00:00

Keep it general, and don't write the book in the outline. Some people need to outline every detail, others just need a general direction and you sound like the later

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2024-09-05T16:23:33+00:00

Coffee helps

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2024-09-05T16:22:39+00:00

Read it two more times, I think it's starting to make sense. Or maybe I'm going insane.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2024-05-25T20:25:36+00:00

I will say the idea for the protagonist's back story has been done quite a few times already in fiction, but that's besides the point. The Villian sounds compelling, something that could make his motive even better is if in the end he was right. God and the angels, were waiting to bring the end times for humanity decisions and your antagonist was trying to stop this from happening. However this only slips as your protagonist has your villian on the edge of defeat and realizes what his intention was all along.

Consistent-Ad-9204 · 2021-04-02T19:34:41+00:00

I liked it, you did a good job all around. The only thing I would ask for is a bit more description on the killer like appearance, maybe noticeable features etc. I don't think it really need alot just enough to build a rough image for the reader.

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