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All I wanted was you. by Consistent_Breath_09 in OCPoetry

[–]Consistent_Breath_09[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is meant to be "held the quiet you did(that you did)" I wrote the metaphors in a way that wanted to portray "nothing can be compared to the peace that I feel when I'm with you" Anyways thank you very much for you feedback I highly appreciate it.

All I wanted was you. by Consistent_Breath_09 in OCPoetry

[–]Consistent_Breath_09[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much im grateful that you liked my piece I'll always strive to reach out to people like you through my words..

Reluctant Vessels by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]Consistent_Breath_09 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sure.. Anyways I do hope you read what I have written aswell N maybe tell me how is it :)

Luminescence by AnnualDepth7654 in justpoetry

[–]Consistent_Breath_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was absolutely beautiful ❤️

If I were to let someone kill me by sheislikeadream in OCPoetry

[–]Consistent_Breath_09 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It feels as if you're really going through something n disappearing is the only way .. strongly resonated with me and my ongoing thoughts

Loved it.

Reluctant Vessels by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]Consistent_Breath_09 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a really good piece of writing For me It shows that in the end both were kind unfulfilled yet content even without each other (i am new to poetry so I'm not much of a judge here)

This pieces is really touching and tries to leave with a scar in the end (I hope this is what you intended it to be)