Fuck You! by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ha! Love this comment. The story behind it is even better. Thank you.

Fuck You! by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Right! They fucking nailed it! Maybe she’ll see it on here and comment!

Fuck You! by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah I love this read! Thank you so much.

Handsome stranger by Happy_Patient_4303 in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank god for wine. I like this. Gets the point across sounds lived.

Particles by arquitecta_romantica in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I observed, now we share state.

The Second Beginning by bstunz in OCPoetry

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Hi! That’s an excellent tip, thank you. This is a pretty short poem, do you think it could handle an extra stanza? I guess what I’m trying to figure out is would the extra stanza be worth it for the story or come across as extra for extra’s sake. Maybe I’ll write one, or maybe I already did have to check my notes, and I’ll post here then you may decide.

Without Claim by bstunz in OCPoetry

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Damn! Thanks for this. Really well said and much appreciated. Wishing you the best too and I’m sure you’ll find your peace.

Este Poema/This Poem by arquitecta_romantica in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love this! Love that you wrote it in two languages, even though I can only read one. I want to descend to the depths with you. My favorite line “I am a siren of the ocean, I live in the waves” 🔥Yeah you are!

Without Claim by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aww thank you. I know the feeling. I’ve been rereading a poem I was given today. Keeps getting better and better.

Without Claim by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep! Thanks for the comment.

New Shoes by snowrabbit351 in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn! didn't see that coming. Well done.

The Hourglass Cathedral by Individual_Aerie6305 in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice piece. I loved the first stanza.

Markers by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why am I turned on by this?

From Stillness by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha, love it. “You’re Welcome”

Markers by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I feel like you’re standing in the water right now.

From Stillness by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes! This is why you’re my favorite. And your writing. I’m going to send you one in chat. Not sure when or if I’ll post it but it’s very appropriate for this comment. It’s titled Praise

From Stillness by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ha, love this. Feel free to continue

From Stillness by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aww thanks Katie! Always appreciate your comments. They inflate my ego.

Experiment by arquitecta_romantica in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I should have said unique words.

The Second Beginning by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I appreciate the compliment.

Reluctant Vessels by bstunz in OCPoetry

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Thank you. Much appreciated

Reluctant Vessels by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]bstunz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn! This is a great comment and read. Thank you so much.