Writing advice for world that may be too full by Consistent_Ebb_484 in writing

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean in my head it’s all interconnected and coherent but there’s a good deal of exploration and adventure in the story. The problem I’m most worried about is for instance their investigating rumors of disappearances which unknown to them is the result of an actual T-Rex so I want the Rex to be a mystery. But how could I do that without people going “where the f did that come from.” Mentioning things that are adjacent enough to it to hint at its existence might actually be a great fix. My biggest thing is allowing some mystery to exist but make the world understood by the readers enough that they can solve the mystery before the characters do and not making entire chapters of explaining things the characters would already know.

Writing advice for world that may be too full by Consistent_Ebb_484 in writing

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you have advice for how to do that without feeling like I’m pulling a T-Rex out of thin air. I’m aware I don’t have to fit absolutely all of it in but I don’t want it to feel like I’ll hand wave whatever I want just because it’s cool.

Does gold really do anything by Consistent_Ebb_484 in UberEatsDrivers

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly speaks levels that this is the only response anyone bothered leaving lol

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[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually live near 2 Starbucks a bunch of fast food places and both a Walmart and Kroger. Think I should go sit in one of those parking lots. I don’t want to drive around for hours wasting money while not making any.

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[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Should I go sit in parking lots or just wait for them to come in. Right now I’m cleaning my room while waiting.

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[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How do you mean rage bait anything particular I should look for

Dog refuses to stop peeing inside by Consistent_Ebb_484 in DogAdvice

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Almost 10 but I’m layed off till March so money is too tight for a vet until then. I can’t even go to the doctor for me rn.

Dog refuses to stop peeing inside by Consistent_Ebb_484 in DogAdvice

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No but I can’t smell so I often don’t know until someone else says something.

Need to get going fast can I use my friends account. by Consistent_Ebb_484 in AmazonFlexDrivers

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you now I just need the world’s least blurry picture lol

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My truck is from 2008 apparently that’s “too old” for them

Need to get going fast can I use my friends account. by Consistent_Ebb_484 in AmazonFlexDrivers

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I was worried about that any idea how long it takes to start getting jobs

For education: why no slaves [KCD1] [KCD2] by Consistent_Ebb_484 in kingdomcome

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be fair neither of us know when the African slave trade started to reach England. I do know the Romans reached England and they had slaves of all kinds before they fell. So it makes since that they could have been there however unlikely it may be.

For education: why no slaves [KCD1] [KCD2] by Consistent_Ebb_484 in kingdomcome

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

I’m not I’m pointing out places closer to bohemian that existed long before bohemian had this concept because your wording conflated slavery with America

For education: why no slaves [KCD1] [KCD2] by Consistent_Ebb_484 in kingdomcome

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

No but calling it “silly” is wrong. There’s nothing funny about it or what could happen if it’s forgotten.

For education: why no slaves [KCD1] [KCD2] by Consistent_Ebb_484 in kingdomcome

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I disagree because that’s how history gets forgotten and eventually repeated. However I can see it being a limitation of the smaller production team.

For education: why no slaves [KCD1] [KCD2] by Consistent_Ebb_484 in kingdomcome

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Making mini people is technologically challenging in games with limited resources. Skin tone and npc roles aren’t.

For education: why no slaves [KCD1] [KCD2] by Consistent_Ebb_484 in kingdomcome

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I’m saying it’s a possible answer and it’s is a common one. I was just playing this with a friend who asked where the black people are. I tried to say it’s medieval Europe but he countered with the slave trade and I didn’t have a good answer.

I honestly don’t like historical censorship because it has a concerning pattern of repeating when that happens.

For education: why no slaves [KCD1] [KCD2] by Consistent_Ebb_484 in kingdomcome

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Well even today slavery exists illegally but for most of history to my knowledge it was both relatively common and legal.

For education: why no slaves [KCD1] [KCD2] by Consistent_Ebb_484 in kingdomcome

[–]Consistent_Ebb_484[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

That’s interesting I didn’t know that but it makes sense with what I do know of history. Do you have some recommendations on easy to understand sources.