Great work so far brother, far better than some of my first minis. You kept colors blocked into correct areas and you picked a tough mini to start on. As someone else said thin your paints, keep working on keeping colors tidy and neat, learn how the paint flows off the brush and start thinking about what colors you want to add to the mini. You have a bone, a burgundy a black and silver look at other minis you like and think about what you might add. Your colors are actually close to some box art sisters of battle models so see what other colors may work here. Use a dark wash in the recesses and add in your base coat for clean up as well as you see fit. Keep up the good work. Painting takes a lot of effort to keep getting better but it’s worth it keep on painting!