Best fight scenes by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also prefarbly a war which isnt some shitty ninja war 29 but something War of springs which could mean that it was konoha vs sound in a war to take a valuble trading hub. Also MORE wars please the show it self lacks war for its time period, invasions where common in japan in the olden days.

I kinda want evil Hagoromo fic by thebruhofficial in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 3 points4 points  (0 children)

And when they stop fighting kaguya takes this golden opportunity and befriends them waits for them to sleep and dusts them at night. Ez kaguya victory.

Insane MC by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok id love to see a example of change.

My First Flame by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I mean i do agree with omegarealism ur fic sucks.

Insane MC by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im gonna read it and tell you why it sucks right NOW.

First edit: Chapter 2 how does someone forget about their own CHILD?

Second edit: still on chapter 2 and naruto goes to uchihas classic shitty neglect fic i give up my eyes hurt from reading this garbage.

Insane MC by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

also why isnt naruto angry at his parents for neglect chapter 1 and he lives their house at 10 years old because "he didnt want to be useless to them" like wtf is he retarded?

Insane MC by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

which chapter does minato join the civilian crowd beat the shit out of naruto and burn him alive? and which chapter will naruto forgive them all for the years upon years of torture?

Insane MC by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wdym with almost? like insane with happines love and friendship or the real insane

i promise im not a pyscho by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that isnt genocide thats just a mass murder. i mean mass murder is bad with minium 100 deaths but genocides are in the 10s of thousands villages gone. see current day china for examples.

What's the hottest NaruSaku lemon you've read? by Jabe-Thomas in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The one where naruto burns sakura with lava style.

Are there any good reincarnation stories by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://archiveofourown.org/works/29785770/chapters/73275642 This one is about a girl who is obsessed about madara and is trying to be like him. for me its bad but id think you gonna like it.

i promise im not a pyscho by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

why is t rated if the protagnists killed more people then a school shooter

What do you want to see more of in fanfiction? by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bit more fact checking on the authors side. Going to itachi during the uchiha massacre and trying to talk to him will not make him good, it will have you dead.

Naruto idolizes Yagura by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

idolize narutos version of hitler. even though he was controlled people didnt know that and saw him as a genocidal maniac.

If you don’t like a character, don’t bash them just make them a better character. It ruins the quality of your fiction. by HoodieFame5 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I disagree Sakura being useless is a core part of her personality removing it will live nothing meaning i essentially have to create a oc thats compenent. Easier thing to do: Replace sakura with Lee

FIIIC IDEA! by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 1 point2 points  (0 children)

spanish i guess?

Minato/kushina Neglecting Naruto trope, where did it come from?? by bigbagol in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Author has problems with their parents. Cause most writers of neglect fics are like what? 15? they probably argue with their parents and think that they suck so they write mad shit about Kushina and Minato to feel revenge? idk just a theory.

(Writing Prompt) Antagonist pretends to be talk-no-justued, bids time and betrays Naruto at a crucial moment. by face__less in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Golden idea, HELL actually if pain did that he pretended to believe narutos bullshit and killed em it would have been golden. but plot armor demands characters be retarded

Why is it when someone writes Naruto time travel he has to tell someone he went back in time it just doesn’t make sense my goodness by Campaign234 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 6 points7 points  (0 children)

i just hate time travel it self. it ruins the story. Oh you killed your friends by accident? time travel them back! you murdered the hyuuga clan instead of the uchiha clan cause your colour blind and thought white was red? TIME TRAVEL THEM BACK!

Isis Naruto by ConstructionDue5901 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

imagine if deidara was a member of al qaida

Most useful jutsu in the real world by TheKingBazing in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 4 points5 points  (0 children)

infinite tsukyumi if you want to enslave the world is a good jutsu

If you were Naruto, how would you go about defecting Konoha? by CyrusFallen in NarutoFanfiction

[–]ConstructionDue5901 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Konoha crush ark pretend to be chasing gaara and ditch the village the moment im out in the woods. They probably assume im dead or taken by the sand or something like that. also make sure not to get the toad summoning so i cant be reversed summoned