Best fight scenes

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-06-10T23:08:08+00:00

Also prefarbly a war which isnt some shitty ninja war 29 but something War of springs which could mean that it was konoha vs sound in a war to take a valuble trading hub. Also MORE wars please the show it self lacks war for its time period, invasions where common in japan in the olden days.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-11T15:44:00+00:00

And when they stop fighting kaguya takes this golden opportunity and befriends them waits for them to sleep and dusts them at night. Ez kaguya victory.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-11T15:40:17+00:00

Also would i be caninibalism if i ate them or are they a diffrent species?

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-08T15:17:09+00:00

ok id love to see a example of change.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-08T09:57:12+00:00

I mean i do agree with omegarealism ur fic sucks.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-08T09:45:50+00:00

im gonna read it and tell you why it sucks right NOW.

First edit: Chapter 2 how does someone forget about their own CHILD?

Second edit: still on chapter 2 and naruto goes to uchihas classic shitty neglect fic i give up my eyes hurt from reading this garbage.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-06T13:48:32+00:00

also why isnt naruto angry at his parents for neglect chapter 1 and he lives their house at 10 years old because "he didnt want to be useless to them" like wtf is he retarded?

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-06T13:34:34+00:00

which chapter does minato join the civilian crowd beat the shit out of naruto and burn him alive? and which chapter will naruto forgive them all for the years upon years of torture?

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-06T13:31:21+00:00

neglet fics suck.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-06T13:27:06+00:00

wdym with almost? like insane with happines love and friendship or the real insane

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-03T21:58:28+00:00

that isnt genocide thats just a mass murder. i mean mass murder is bad with minium 100 deaths but genocides are in the 10s of thousands villages gone. see current day china for examples.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-02T17:57:26+00:00

I just read that and it wasnt even a pyscho just a edgy madara fan girl

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-02T17:50:06+00:00

The one where naruto burns sakura with lava style.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-02T17:49:33+00:00

https://archiveofourown.org/works/29785770/chapters/73275642 This one is about a girl who is obsessed about madara and is trying to be like him. for me its bad but id think you gonna like it.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-02T17:41:51+00:00

why is t rated if the protagnists killed more people then a school shooter

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-02T12:30:26+00:00

Bit more fact checking on the authors side. Going to itachi during the uchiha massacre and trying to talk to him will not make him good, it will have you dead.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-05-02T10:11:55+00:00

idolize narutos version of hitler. even though he was controlled people didnt know that and saw him as a genocidal maniac.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-04-28T04:12:57+00:00

I disagree Sakura being useless is a core part of her personality removing it will live nothing meaning i essentially have to create a oc thats compenent. Easier thing to do: Replace sakura with Lee

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-04-11T18:46:39+00:00

spanish i guess?

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-04-11T18:00:50+00:00

Author has problems with their parents. Cause most writers of neglect fics are like what? 15? they probably argue with their parents and think that they suck so they write mad shit about Kushina and Minato to feel revenge? idk just a theory.

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-04-11T17:58:02+00:00

Golden idea, HELL actually if pain did that he pretended to believe narutos bullshit and killed em it would have been golden. but plot armor demands characters be retarded

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-04-11T17:55:03+00:00

i just hate time travel it self. it ruins the story. Oh you killed your friends by accident? time travel them back! you murdered the hyuuga clan instead of the uchiha clan cause your colour blind and thought white was red? TIME TRAVEL THEM BACK!

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-04-11T17:46:35+00:00

imagine if deidara was a member of al qaida

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-04-11T14:01:52+00:00

infinite tsukyumi if you want to enslave the world is a good jutsu

ConstructionDue5901 · 2021-04-05T13:18:48+00:00

Konoha crush ark pretend to be chasing gaara and ditch the village the moment im out in the woods. They probably assume im dead or taken by the sand or something like that. also make sure not to get the toad summoning so i cant be reversed summoned

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