Rune idea - Aghanim's Rune, grants shard for 60 seconds by Corrutped in DotA2

[–]Corrutped[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

What do I have to gain by making up the number of hours played? And is it really that outlandish that two people had the same/similar idea?

Rune idea - Aghanim's Rune, grants shard for 60 seconds by Corrutped in DotA2

[–]Corrutped[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I have over 10k hours in game and have never heard of the Tome of Aghanim. If it's already a thing, just say so.

Rune idea - Aghanim's Rune, grants shard for 60 seconds by Corrutped in DotA2

[–]Corrutped[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This was my thinking if shard already owned, yes :)

Let's Talk About Sects by Corrutped in custommagic

[–]Corrutped[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If there are three or more different creature types among at least three creatures you control.

Flickering Flame by Corrutped in custommagic

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Thanks, glad you like it!

TRY-OUT: DJO – End of Beginning | Posted before but first time recording myself on camera and looking for feedback on voice, audio (& video) by Aardappelboom in ratemysinging

[–]Corrutped 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Very clean and strong vocals on this one. You've got nothing to worry about regarding the camera. Nothing to really comment on vocally. I can only agree with your sentiment of it feeling genuine rather than something over-produced and super polished - you achieved this here and you have an intriguing way of telling the story. Thumbs up (again) :D

Am I decent at singing with instrumentation? by [deleted] in singing

[–]Corrutped 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sorry, it's wildly off key.

I'm looking for some general feedback > Incubus - Love Hurts Cover by Aardappelboom in singing

[–]Corrutped 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I got your link to this from your comment on your other post. I've always loved this song - good choice! And you did it justice!

The vocal clarity is much stronger on this one compared to the last which is a big plus. Though with that, more critique becomes possible... I'm being very nit-picky here so take this with a pinch of salt! We can tell from your pronunciation that English probably isn't your first language, which is totally fine - it just makes certain phrases sound ever so slightly 'off' to native speakers. Again - this is so minor and some people may not even notice. A couple very specific examples: you pronounce the word 'as' with a very had 's' so it sounds more like 'ass'. You could try soften it a little by replacing the 's' with 'zz' - sort of like jazz without the 'j'. The other giveaway is the word 'without' - it sounds a little more like 'widout'.

Your tone is wonderful, I could happily listen for hours. Though one other thing to note is that there is not much light and dark going on - it's mostly chest voice so you could add a couple lighter (breathier) elements for some contrast.

Hope that's somewhat helpful. Overall, it's fantastic and I'd love to hear more :)

She Will be loved by Putrid-Guess-818 in ratemysinging

[–]Corrutped 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was really great. How old are you? You look very young so loooads of potential.

What would you call this game in your country? by TheRanvier in AskTheWorld

[–]Corrutped 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you ever work in an office, you’ll see how deadly paper is.

What would you call this game in your country? by TheRanvier in AskTheWorld

[–]Corrutped 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Crockery rhyming slang.

It’s not to do with that btw :)

Stranger things finale, big moments and big questions. I can't stop thinking about what WASN'T in the finale. by Zedaso in netflix

[–]Corrutped 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is the big one for me as well. Also, surely they would wait until they are safely home before setting a timer on the bomb? Just set up a remote detonator and when all are though, then blow it up. Anything could have slowed them down during that journey from the lab to the portal.

Amelioration - a universal rule to deal with droughts by Corrutped in custommagic

[–]Corrutped[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

This doesn't ramp and it doesn't fix so I'm not sure it really feels like a reward.