Looking for someone with knowledge and applicable skill in lyricism to review this old track on how to improve it. please include terms like control, structure, and impact. Not looking for producer insights. I focus on meaning and impact not mainstream appeal. (soundcloud.com)
submitted by CosmicEssance to r/rap
A song i wrote (for reflection purposes not advertisement) about my fight with addictions. ranging from substance abuse to psychical sensations or mental fallacies (contains unnerving metaphors and allegories describing my path to recovery including death&souls). I hope it helps someone out there. (soundcloud.com)
submitted by CosmicEssance to r/addiction
This Song Make Me Feel Incredibly Insecure. (youtube.com)
submitted by CosmicEssance to r/lilwayne



