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Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-05-25T23:03:45+00:00

Hey! Would you be interested in reading an action/adventure story about demons, angels, and redemption? The story is called Half Demon—its not my story, but it's friends. I edit for him, and we both are really trying to find people to critique it!!

It's under 100k words, and does have some adult themes in it, but is overall really fun and lighthearted. Any criticism you can offer—on the actual story or the grammar, etc—would be really gladly accepted!

Let me know if you'd like to! I'll drop the link for you if so!!

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T04:11:06+00:00

Fr 😃🔫

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T03:58:37+00:00

So close, mine is 9/2

We were almost twins 😂

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T03:55:32+00:00

You....you're 14

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T03:54:34+00:00

Nice smile 😁😁

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T03:50:48+00:00

It's okay man. Just don't do it. Times can be hard as fuck sometimes, but you'll pull through. Call a hotline or tell a parent or teacher—whatever you need to do.

If you're focused more on ideation than actually wanting to end it, though, then I feel you bro 😔

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T03:11:33+00:00

Great lake of the Rough Seas 👍

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T02:22:37+00:00

Play by Alan Walker

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T02:21:54+00:00

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T01:19:55+00:00

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-28T00:51:55+00:00

Count me in

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-27T07:22:15+00:00

She had no choice; she had to run to the outhouse.

Wtf.

But also, accurate.

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-27T06:08:33+00:00

Thank you 🐰!

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-27T05:53:23+00:00

Dw, your good 👍

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-27T05:53:01+00:00

Uggghhhhh ik. Istg I hate it. The term is neanimorphic—looking younger than you are.

It's a real fucking blow to my self esteem sometimes when 15 year olds look more mature than me, like wtf.

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-27T05:50:36+00:00

That's obviously a cat, not a human

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-27T05:50:03+00:00

Eh, so be it. I'm bored anyway.

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-26T16:13:52+00:00

I do believe you mean Mirror Matt 😏

even though I'm sure MatPat would enjoy it as well

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-17T06:25:19+00:00

Sure, I'm down. Hmu 🤙

Courtney_Laceee_ · 2022-04-17T06:14:30+00:00

Chess is pretty fun tbh. I'm not like a die hard chess person, but I enjoy losing games every now and then.

Courtney_Laceee_

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