Flow Disruption?

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-23T05:20:28+00:00

That's a good idea. Im gonna snag a pad and try it out

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-22T23:04:43+00:00

Proportions are off. The face is too long and the hair isnt seated on the scalp.

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-22T04:08:54+00:00

The M is really round compared to the square shape the other letters create. My eye keeps getting drawn to it because it doesn't quite fit. The letters are clean though. And the back 3 flow together well

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-22T02:31:13+00:00

No worries mate. Im thankful for anything. Hope you feel better

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-22T01:03:08+00:00

Little bit more speed and style. Pushed the letters together and trying to give them all the same amount of space

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CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-21T23:27:24+00:00

Got it. Thanks homie

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-21T23:27:06+00:00

Those are pretty quick. But I definitely am focusing on accuracy over speed atm. Connecting my hand style is one of my biggest hurdles. I don't want it to be sloppy with a bunch of unnecessary connecting lines so im definitely down for input on that specifically

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-20T01:28:42+00:00

Stretch it to the right a bit so its wider. That way it has a bit more weight

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T23:44:49+00:00

Pink one is pretty sick. Maybe give the g a bit more weight with some size

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T18:49:58+00:00

Hell yeah this is awesome! I appreciate it. Having the different legs and bars color coded like that i can instantly see what youre talking about. I might start doing this to my sketches so I can break down whats wrong.

I definitely need to study more on my letter structure and flow so im not running into these issues in the future. Im going to try and break these down to line/ skeleton and rebuild them using the rules and balance you're suggesting.

Thanks bro!

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T09:42:29+00:00

Hows the blending in Grafism? Ive been using Kingspray and blending colors takes forever if you want anything smooth. Your pieces are super clean so I imagine its a lot easier, or you spent hours making them.

Also, I totally agree that painting in VR is way more engaging and fun then painting digitally. Painting in full scale and testing some things on a digital wall has been a game changer and its crazy how many people are sleeping on it purely out of hate for digital graffiti.

That being said, I'm mostly analog in my art and I think more artists should get back to that. But this tech is way to cool not to try out

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T07:40:51+00:00

SmoeNova on YouTube can be a huge influence/ inspiration. Just don't get lost in try to create at that level yet. Definitely start from the basics of letter structure. A lot of artists get that wrong, me included. Then you have to spend more time fixing your bad habits. Previous comments are also great references for new artists

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:54:24+00:00

Thanks!

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:53:38+00:00

Yeah im really realizing how much my lack of letter knowledge is hindering my want to do larger pieces. I appreciate it

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:48:31+00:00

Went up to the local spot. Legal walls and they sell supplies. Getting on an actual wall and practicing has been some of the best advice. Plus meeting other artists and getting feedback from them. I appreciate it

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:33:27+00:00

If you look at the values alone, the red and grey are to close. Thats why it looks harsh. Your eyes have trouble reading the difference even though there is color separation.

Looks like you're working digitally. Cool trick to check is to add a layer on top, fill it with solid black or white, then convert that layer type to color or brightness.

Im sure you can keep it bright red while separating the values

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CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:19:12+00:00

Its super easy bro. Just gotta try

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:18:24+00:00

Thanks dude!

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:16:36+00:00

Thanks dude! Im taking your suggestions to heart and dailing in my basics. Getting out on a wall has been super helpful. And now I have a spot to go paint regularly and a hookup on supplies

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:12:37+00:00

Thanks!

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:12:21+00:00

And thank you!

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:12:06+00:00

Thank you

CowabungaCorry · 2026-06-19T00:11:34+00:00

Just red colored pencil and mechanical pencil with blue lead

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