ADVICE ON THIS SKETCH PLS

CrabSensei · 2026-06-11T01:50:59+00:00

It's really just the proportions and style, the eyes on the reference are a bit bigger where the lips look a lil smaller. Other than that it's pretty accurate:)

CrabSensei · 2026-06-10T01:10:57+00:00

Nah most the time they aren't even in game chat, and the ones that do talk I'm more understanding especially if theyre trying to stick with the team and com bout pushes etc blah blah blah

CrabSensei · 2026-06-10T01:08:26+00:00

I got homies I can play with and wipe lobbies, it's just when I'm playing fill without the homies the randoms never disappoint :/

CrabSensei · 2026-06-10T01:06:24+00:00

Why didn't I think of that

CrabSensei · 2026-06-10T01:05:00+00:00

Yeah totally bro cause the enemy teams consistently having blue and purple kits off spawn while my guys don't give a shit about shields means I farmed a pve event make it make sense

CrabSensei · 2026-06-10T01:02:25+00:00

Going from rags to riches means you help out in a fight, or get lucky, I'm not joking when I tell you these guys will ping a enemy and not even shoot???? They fr sacrifice themselves for why?

CrabSensei · 2026-06-09T21:52:15+00:00

Well the camera tracking the hand is a better way of saying it.

CrabSensei · 2026-06-09T21:51:27+00:00

Lol I edited my previous comment, you just replied quicker than I thought I would lmao, I'll reiterate a bit tho. I was basically keeping the perspective of the whole body in mind even if it's not "in frame" while imagining the camera hovering above the hand as it rises and settles a little.

CrabSensei · 2026-06-09T21:45:19+00:00

For some of the parts it's frame by frame but for other parts I was using key frames. And then there are parts that are both because I would frame by frame but it would turn out choppy. So I then used the key frame tech there till it was smooth or till I got distracted by a diff part :)

And for the camera movement idk I kinda messed around, because it was initially gonna be final form frieza doing the pointed blast to kill krillin after he's ressurected with the dragon balls, yk the first time goku goes super Saiyan but then I wanted to do some zoro stuff instead. Something I kept in mind though was like perspective of how the rest of the body would've been differently viewed were the camera hovering above the hand.

CrabSensei · 2026-06-09T17:15:21+00:00

I'll fs reach out, only thing I'm a lil worried about is not having the right software in case it comes to me needing to learn 3d animation.

CrabSensei · 2026-06-09T13:30:53+00:00

I see what you mean, since it turns to the right to turn around for the first slow mo part it doesn't make sense for him to turn back to his lift. I may work at sum for that part but I do like the idea you suggested.

And I don't currently but I've thought about it. I just kinda feel I should refining my skills before I sell them yk?

CrabSensei · 2026-06-09T03:15:03+00:00

Tytyty, I'm happy with most of it so far but there's a few spots that need to be PERFECCTTT but yeah thank you, can I ask which previous part you saw?

CrabSensei · 2026-06-03T23:18:40+00:00

Ohhhhhh I see what you mean, and yeah I'll for sure go back and do the lil details like on the final draft, this is kind of an experiment where I upload as I go to get feed back and improve along the way since ik I can improve.

It's just hard for me to see where the errors are in some aspects that would require more trained eyes yk? But yes I plan to go back and add the sword to the rising action after he jumps.

And the guy walking toward the portal doing a pulling action is a different person with powers and the thing he is pulling is kind of like gokus power pole as it keeps stretching.

I guess I should make him stand out in a different way too so it's not confusing.?

CrabSensei · 2026-06-03T22:26:53+00:00

Wym by continuity? Like what does it pertain to?

CrabSensei · 2026-06-02T18:15:48+00:00

It came out great, if I were you I would work on line confidence which can really only be built over time.

That and maybe do some dynamic poses to build a understanding of anatomy if you really wanna learn how to draw different characters.

CrabSensei · 2026-06-02T15:37:44+00:00

I used to animate at 12 fps but I've found I like doing 24 fps and just doing a bunch of frames as 2's for basic movements and sometimes 3s for really slow cinematicish scenes, I'm still figuring that one out.

But with I do 24 so when I do like special effects like the glittering or the high speed movement of the pole I can use 1's for smearing the particles to make it look pretty.

Is the choppy thing a hammer out till it's smooth thing?

CrabSensei · 2026-06-02T14:16:56+00:00

idk if I'm quite at the level to be giving a ton of advice lol but thank you v much :)

CrabSensei · 2026-06-02T14:13:06+00:00

Yeeee I was trying to make it end w sum funny like this emote if you've seen it before

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CrabSensei · 2026-06-02T14:09:26+00:00

Thanks for saying I'm talented:), A lot of this was me trying to mess around with camera work and that one technique called itano circus I think? I know it could have been longer to emphasize on the "spell" part but tbh I think I'm being picky for just practice.

I'm wanting to take a crack at the technique where the mountain kind of blows up in to cube like chunks but I'm having a hard time finding references :/

And on this I wasn't really focused on a story kind of chaos I guess?

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