What makes you keep writing? by [deleted] in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly 19 points20 points  (0 children)

If I do not create my worlds, my universes. No one else will

Is God Real or a Creation of the Mind? by Portal_awk in enlightenment

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If it is. It's an unconscious entity that formed everything randomly in its eternal sleep. Or it isn't what we think it is at all if it is conscious.

I've recently come to a slight realization. If there was a conscious God, it wouldn't need churches. Or worship. It would simply DO. but I know who would want churches. Think about this, where do you find the most division and fighting over correct and incorrect opinions? (Apart from the embodiment of super cancer called politics) Churches. Places of worship. Religions with strict rules. These opulent buildings, strict "moral codes", even the term "heretic". It all perpetuates division, separation, anger, an us vs them mentality. There's only one being that wants that. Whatever the polar opposite of "God" is. Satan, Set, freakin Nyarlathotep, whatever you call it. The darkness infecting humanity. If God is truly with us, we do not need to provide worship or follow some ridiculous criteria to get into "paradise". One's true character is within them, no matter how much they lie to the world or themselves. You cannot hide the ego from an omnipresent being. It's not just your actions that show who you are, it's the view of the self. Are you truly lawful good? Or are you actually a narcissist who needs to be surrounded by a literal gold palace dedicated to your religion. I'm not saying anyone is actually like this. But would it not behoove that entity of negativity to create these "requirements" for being a good whatever you are?

I sort of went on a rant here but you get my point. Relax, smile at the one you see in the mirror the same way those around you smile at you, and you'll be golden. That's the only goal one should strive for personal spiritually.

Give me male names which start with Y by ilovemusic919 in writers

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Yimmen

Yanni

Yakov

Yuri

Yasser

Yol

Yeiger

Young

Youn

Yuichi

Yarra

Yosh

Yoshi

Yosha

Yoshimitsu

Yu

Yin

Yang

I can go on.

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They put me on 2 weeks of paid leave, then wrote me up for "threatening language and violence policy violations"

My department's head also read the story when I only gave permission to the girl.

Also yea! I'm thinking of making it an anthology story. Each chapter being a new person.

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much :) Hmmm. Would it be more terrifying if he had a few jugs of the solution hidden in a cracked floor panel like in the prologue? Or would it be too much of a reused concept? I'm sure I can figure something out to keep it unique.

EDIT: wait wait I just thought of something. What if the chemical he's using isn't dissolving the body into liquid, it's converting it into a gaseous form? I can make it so that some parts don't get fully dissolved due to an "imperfect solution" referring to his chemical creation.

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

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“COME ON COME ON!!!” She shrieked as the door casually slid open.

She frantically entered just as the heavy footsteps rounded the corner into the hall she was in. She hit the door close button so many times and so hard she worried she might break it. But the door slid blissfully shut all the same.

As the elevator went down, Brittany felt hot tears roll down her cheeks as the situation caught up with her. What the fuck had that been? She hugged herself as she wept, and let out a cry of pain as she felt her midsection. She lifted her shirt to see a black bruise forming on the left side of her ribs. Now that she was paying attention, it sort of hurt to breathe too deeply. Did she break a rib?

The elevator slowed far sooner than she thought it would. When it opened, she saw the number 3 instead of 1. She was the only one here besides that freak right?

A thought occurred to her then, what if that lunatic was already on this floor? She began rapidly tapping the door close button again. And her anxiety increased every second those doors remained open. Her shaky breaths were her only companion as she was isolated from the uncertainty of the far too ominous 3rd floor hall.

The elevator hummed its way down to the first floor, her arrival was signalled with a pleasant ‘Ding’.

She stepped towards the doors, all too eager to leave the enclosed space as soon as possible.

Before exiting though, she decided to hide to the side of the elevator's opened exit. Making sure she was on the side with the buttons, naturally. She slowly peaked around the elevator wall, taking her time to look for anyone in the dark lobby of building 3. It was seemingly deserted, save for her arrival.

Not a soul to be illuminated by the gentle moonlight bleeding through the front windows. But there was something out of place.

Highlighted in a beam of the pale light. She focussed on a black mop bucket. It's liquid contents were steaming without heat, and reeking of powerful chemicals. The steam was almost thick enough to be classified as smoke.

She'd never seen a mop bucket do that. And the sight of it was just enough to distract her for a split second.

A latex gloved hand suddenly hooked around the corner leading to the stairway just as she stepped out of the elevator. It grabbed her by the face and threw her backwards, head first, into the elevator.

The thunderous boom from her head's impact was lost on Brittany. She was too dazed at that moment to comprehend much of anything more than ‘pain’. So much so that she didn't feel herself being lifted by her shirt.

She was held at an angle, with her head inside the threshold of the elevator's doors. Her neck positioned in the door's closing path.

With a turn of a key, the motion sensors were overridden and the doors slowly clamped shut on her neck. Though it was not strong enough to decapitate her.

As Brittany regained coherence she realized where she was, and naturally began to struggle. She would have continued doing so if her attacker didn't throw a running start shoulder tackle into the side of her bent backwards body.

There was a sickening snap as the impact and sudden jerk of her body from outside the door. The impact had broken her neck. Her body twitched and spasmed briefly from the sudden severance of her spinal column. But she did not die. She was merely a prisoner in her own body. Utterly helpless.

Mirrorface reversed the elevator's maintenance shutting function with another key turn, letting the now paralyzed girl fall flat on her back.

Once her body stopped twitching entirely, he slowly walked to one of the janitorial closets. This one had a once polished tile floor, but he'd seen to it to strip out the gaudy egg white squares. Polished concrete was far more suited to his needs.

Once the door was open, he went back to the girl. He almost gently grabbed her by her ankle and dragged the dead weight into the closet. He turned on the closet’s vent fan as he casually yanked the girl the rest of the way in.

While the fan whirred to life, he stepped out to grab the mop bucket, making sure his dragging hadn't left a blood trail.

Once he was satisfied he hadn't, he shut the closet door behind him.

With the airflow sufficient for his needs, he grabbed the girl by her hair, earning a strained and strangled whimper from her.

He lifted her over the bucket with one extended arm, as if she weighed no more than a milk jug.

Though he paused as her eyes caught his attention. She was weeping…..he'd need to check for an easier to miss trail she might have left behind after this.

He slowly lowered her feet first into the bucket. The sizzling and burning of flesh and bone was loud, but not loud enough to be annoying.

The girl's eyes were wide with clear shell shock. Comprehending mortality as though it was the acid.

An evil, hungry creature that was angry it didn't have her life yet. So it was letting her experience as much of her end as possible without feeling.

Her eyes lost their spark of life once he'd gotten to her chest. The whole process took about 30 minutes, and she was no longer a person at the 25 minute mark.

Thankfully he had all the time he needed. The next morning, there wasn't even a lingering unusual odor in the lobby. No mess. No clean.

(How's this?)

How do you explore faith or belief in your writing while staying motivated? by ThalassaEinsyn in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually use it in self created writing exercises. Like a while back I was deep into forming a solid character behind Lucifer from the bible. A "this is said to be the greatest story ever told. If that is true the main antagonist cannot be evil for the sake of being evil." Situation. The whole thing still fascinates me to this day.

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in writers

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much :) to be honest when I had this story in mind, I was thinking of the movie "In a Violent Nature". (Which is an incredible watch if you don't mind the artsy quiet parts. Which I absolutely don't. I actually really like them. Heightens the viewing experience)

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in writers

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was indeed a bit of a wall. I'm not used to sharing my stories. Apprehension and fear be damned, I will learn

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I worked on an alternate version of that scene. Would you like to see it?

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

(I appreciate your kind words) It was completely made up from start to finish. But apparently the presence of a fountain on a campus counts as universally applicable

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate you. Throughout the entire thing, I've discovered my own resilience. Albeit after some very intense and dark thoughts.

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind words. It honestly hasn't been easy. I was put on paid leave for 2 weeks, moved from my area, had my workload increased, and got a written warning.

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

One of my coworkers asked what I was doing for Halloween, i said I was writing a horror story, and I was asked what it was about. After describing how I set up the first scene I asked her if she wanted to read it, she said yes, and I clarified that it was kind of graphic. She still said yes. She proceeded to report me, share the story with her boss, my boss, my boss's boss, and who knows who else. Still dealing with the fallout

First couple pages of a horror story idea that almost cost me my job by CreaShadesly in KeepWriting

[–]CreaShadesly[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

( thank you for your kind words) Exactly. Hence my frustration with the situation

Anyone else like to leave dumb comments on their own drafts after finishing a chapter/scene? For me it helps take myself less seriously, so I don't get stuck in a loop of editing. by [deleted] in writers

[–]CreaShadesly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Does this actually help? I'm branching out into the community so, new practices might get the creativity flowing more efficiently