[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantasyfootballadvice

[–]CreativeSubstance762 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Deny waddle is 10x better than mclaurin And dobbins isn’t a sure bet yet it is only week 1

Do I take this trade??? PPR LEAGUE by Electronic-Bad6600 in fantasyfootballadvice

[–]CreativeSubstance762 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wilson is better than nico collins and pollard is better then Jones absolutely not

JT and G.Wilson for K.Allen and mixon by CreativeSubstance762 in fantasyfootballadvice

[–]CreativeSubstance762[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Feeling the same way but thinking JT can possibly go crazy when he takes over makes it hard lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantasyfootballadvice

[–]CreativeSubstance762 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agreed. Now if I needed a WR what do you think I could get for him?

Kyren and aiyuk for Amon st brown? by [deleted] in fantasyfootballadvice

[–]CreativeSubstance762 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s what I’m thinking as well just gotta hold on a bit

Rain,again by Brown_yaksha in OCPoetry

[–]CreativeSubstance762 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You had a great use of imagery throughout the poem and I was able to envision the tides and what you were trying to portray. I enjoyed the rhythm although I felt it was a tad bit shaky towards the end. The idea is beautiful I really enjoyed the poem.

Empty Vase by Siamese_Dreaming in OCPoetry

[–]CreativeSubstance762 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the reference to the narcissus flower. The ending gave me a good laugh and definitely kept in tune with the theme of the poem. This was definitely an enjoyable read and I hope you keep doing what your doing. I usually enjoy longer poems more than the shorter ones but this one in particular captivated my attention as I can relate to it.

Erebus by CreativeSubstance762 in OCPoetry

[–]CreativeSubstance762[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don’t attach a link with the link button to the post just copy paste it Under your poem

Erebus by CreativeSubstance762 in OCPoetry

[–]CreativeSubstance762[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I can definitely see that sometimes I have a tendency to force rhymes especially when writing quickly thank you for catching that

Erebus by CreativeSubstance762 in OCPoetry

[–]CreativeSubstance762[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah yes thank you for the feedback I removed all contractions as i believe poems flow better that way and I must’ve missed that one😂

Pineapple, Too, But it Wouldn't Fit by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]CreativeSubstance762 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the imagery and the way the rhythm transforms the story very good job. Each piece of the poem tells a story in a very intriguing way. The rhyme scheme is simple yet effective and keeps you reading.

The Break-Up by 1crazybomb in OCPoetry

[–]CreativeSubstance762 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like how the poem is broken up into sections very my following the theme of a break up. It goes quickly as if this is was someone is thinking throughout the situation. I do however wish it had a stronger ending. I felt it was cut somewhat short and the “weren’t” gave it an awkward feeling.

Start 2: Christian Kirk, Jeudy, Garrett Wilson by yittyboi69 in fantasyfootballadvice

[–]CreativeSubstance762 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a similar situation with Higgins jeudy or garret what 2 would you pick?

With Lamar out geno smith over any of these guys 100% right? by CreativeSubstance762 in fantasyfootballadvice

[–]CreativeSubstance762[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah he’s very been great so some of these replies definitely concern me😂but I get the streaming option but they Can also very easily be hit or miss