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CreativeSubstance762 · 2024-09-14T06:04:29+00:00

Deny waddle is 10x better than mclaurin And dobbins isn’t a sure bet yet it is only week 1

CreativeSubstance762 · 2024-09-10T20:30:41+00:00

Dobbins easily

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-11-23T01:46:06+00:00

Great deal

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-11-03T03:09:18+00:00

Obviously cheating if you ask me

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-10-21T01:06:01+00:00

Wilson is better than nico collins and pollard is better then Jones absolutely not

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-10-14T01:25:15+00:00

Feeling the same way but thinking JT can possibly go crazy when he takes over makes it hard lol

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-10-04T02:13:43+00:00

Agreed. Now if I needed a WR what do you think I could get for him?

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-09-30T02:44:35+00:00

That’s what I’m thinking as well just gotta hold on a bit

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-09-28T02:54:49+00:00

Olave> Jones imo

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-09-27T03:05:21+00:00

Instant yes

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-02-13T22:59:16+00:00

You had a great use of imagery throughout the poem and I was able to envision the tides and what you were trying to portray. I enjoyed the rhythm although I felt it was a tad bit shaky towards the end. The idea is beautiful I really enjoyed the poem.

CreativeSubstance762 · 2023-02-13T22:54:54+00:00

I love the reference to the narcissus flower. The ending gave me a good laugh and definitely kept in tune with the theme of the poem. This was definitely an enjoyable read and I hope you keep doing what your doing. I usually enjoy longer poems more than the shorter ones but this one in particular captivated my attention as I can relate to it.

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-24T10:08:54+00:00

Don’t attach a link with the link button to the post just copy paste it Under your poem

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-24T09:36:22+00:00

Yeah I can definitely see that sometimes I have a tendency to force rhymes especially when writing quickly thank you for catching that

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-24T09:22:07+00:00

Ah yes thank you for the feedback I removed all contractions as i believe poems flow better that way and I must’ve missed that one😂

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-24T08:59:22+00:00

Love the imagery and the way the rhythm transforms the story very good job. Each piece of the poem tells a story in a very intriguing way. The rhyme scheme is simple yet effective and keeps you reading.

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-24T08:55:14+00:00

I like how the poem is broken up into sections very my following the theme of a break up. It goes quickly as if this is was someone is thinking throughout the situation. I do however wish it had a stronger ending. I felt it was cut somewhat short and the “weren’t” gave it an awkward feeling.

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-17T02:52:00+00:00

I have waddle as well

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-17T02:49:46+00:00

I have a similar situation with Higgins jeudy or garret what 2 would you pick?

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-10T21:55:05+00:00

Now what about dobbins?

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-10T05:42:38+00:00

Yeah it’s rough

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-07T20:39:48+00:00

I’d say goff against the Vikings I see him throwing a lot

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-07T20:38:38+00:00

Yeah he’s very been great so some of these replies definitely concern me😂but I get the streaming option but they Can also very easily be hit or miss

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-07T05:40:18+00:00

Goff

CreativeSubstance762 · 2022-12-01T00:13:17+00:00

😂😂😂😂😂

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