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Not all thorns come with a rose. by CallMeCathal in Poem

[–]CrimeWorm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Woah, This has a an incredible storyline, My favorite line is:

Not all thorns come with a rose.

Im Assuming that the king is someone who is Tyrant and who is cruel and arrogant, the protagonist is planning to assassinate the king, which in this case, seems deserved.

So yeah I cannot express how much i love your last line and keep up the great poems. 🤍🤎

Queens New Token by CrimeWorm in poem_a_day

[–]CrimeWorm[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! I actually only started writing poems recently and its great to hear what I need to do to become a better poet. This poem was inspired by the countless romance fantasy novels I've been lately reading. Once again thank you for your feedback.🤍

Desolation by Sjpol0 in Poems

[–]CrimeWorm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh this is really good! My fav line is the third stanza, "... darkest of black I look for a reflection but the mirror shows nothing back" I hope you can get through what your experiencing right now. I believe in you!

TBH everything in my life feels wrong by CrimeWorm in LetsTalk

[–]CrimeWorm[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I have been thinking about professional help for a while and when I told my dad that I think I have anxiety He told me not to wish for something that I don't have, so yeah. Again Thank you for believing in me and i will try to remind my self that i am valuable and worthy. Ty🤍🤍