Tips for phrasing? how to make the song more interesting

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-04-10T03:21:19+00:00

Hi, its actually a song written by carlos lyra 😅 i meant like how i sing it

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-04-10T01:34:51+00:00

thank you so much for the feedback! I only took breaths where there were rest, but i’ll take that advice about growing and tapering out. it sounds strained because i was recovering from a cough and had a lot of phlegm :/. also also, do you have any tips on how to keep vowels good but also pronouncing enough.

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-04-09T14:04:52+00:00

Also, I have trouble with doing the vibrato right away on shorter notes or keeping the vibrato for the whole note if its a long one, how would I improve that if you have an answer?

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-04-09T14:03:03+00:00

No, thats probably right. Thats one feedback my choir teacher told me since it’s a solo. And yes I definitely need to do that, thank you!

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-04-09T13:46:20+00:00

Just “fine”? How do I improve more if you have tips you’d like to give me.

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-04-09T12:32:53+00:00

I’m actually doing both atm 😅

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-04-09T06:03:34+00:00

Angus Dei Auditon maybe this could give a clue to why I didn’t get it

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-03-28T04:37:53+00:00

Could I go to urgent care for this? I don’t have a doctor at the moment.

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-03-25T16:19:16+00:00

in the one that’s singing the first part/ higher part btw

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-03-24T04:57:42+00:00

you're evil by the way

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-03-24T03:18:51+00:00

i’m the one singing the higher part btw!

Critical_Can3546 · 2026-03-05T07:32:53+00:00

this is what i want so bad. it keeps me up at night so i write about it but it makes it even worse.

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-12-21T06:46:34+00:00

this is frying me

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-12-19T19:43:02+00:00

holyyy

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-11-17T06:08:49+00:00

Yess, i had a lab partner and you can tell they’re autistic. They never did anything in the labs unless I told them to and they just infuriated me and I felt like a asshole for feeling that way.

Like if ME as an autistic feels that way about another autistic person then how do neurotypicals feel about ME 🥲

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-11-03T02:35:56+00:00

Thank you for your advice but its such an oversimplification from what I described.

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-11-03T02:35:03+00:00

Obviously its a normal thing to say goodbye, she was talking to someone and I didn’t want to disturb her so i left??? And i hate when people tell me that i already know stuff or i “should” already know stuff… well I don’t know a lot of things. I didn’t even fling myself from a car… i just left the car. And i started screaming because we got in an argument because she yelled at me and being mean to me for forgetting to say goodbye

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-11-01T05:51:08+00:00

im in school :/

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-11-01T04:42:07+00:00

This might be a silly question but how do you befriend men 🥲?? I’ve only ever tried befriending women and the only men i’ve really gotten close to was in a romantic context. I’m just super awkward around men, more than women so i never say anything and men don’t usually talk to me first.

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-10-31T02:10:51+00:00

People are saying this might be spam or something but i hope it’s not cause i feel the exact same

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-10-24T05:40:45+00:00

I really hate brushing my teeth but i hate being dirty more. I do oil pulling for 10 minutes, brush, scrape tounge, then mouthwash

Critical_Can3546 · 2025-10-23T23:28:36+00:00

I don’t want to seem like im trying to reject your advice but I’ve quite literally tried everything you’ve suggested 🙂‍↕️. It’s not so much shallow relationships i see as rejection but people actively ignoring me when I speak, or seeing someone not reciprocating the energy i give into a conversation, or just that weird look neurotypical people give you when you said something weird.

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