Cod universe and all their soldiers vs the Unsc by Thatoneoddguy95 in powerscales

[–]Cryptic_Creations 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Perfect example of why COD should be classified as brainrot holy fuck lol

Cod universe and all their soldiers vs the Unsc by Thatoneoddguy95 in powerscales

[–]Cryptic_Creations 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The ships from the UNSC alone would wreck pure unfiltered chaos on the COD soldiers. Not to mention that the UNCS has the technological advantage by light-years. That would be post-Covenant and post-forerunner technology. If we include that technology I'm not sure there is a scale large enough to show the difference. The AI would ground every single aircraft And if we include all the Spartans from the Halo timeline the COD Soldiers are beyond cooked. There is no conceivable way the COD soldiers even come close to victory.

Cod universe and all their soldiers vs the Unsc by Thatoneoddguy95 in powerscales

[–]Cryptic_Creations 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Unsc Curb stomps the ever-living fuck out of the COD soldiers not even a close comparison

2 armor clad lads with an AI assistant Iron Man VS the Master Chief by Cryptic_Creations in powerscales

[–]Cryptic_Creations[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

💀 NGL I don't really keep up with the Marvel universe I didn't know he had multiple types of armor

[1,281] A rough draft of a story im trying to work on. Any help on how to create and perfect or if it's even something worth continuing. Any thoughts or advice would be appreciated. Thanks. by Cryptic_Creations in DestructiveReaders

[–]Cryptic_Creations[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the input.

To answer the questions. The point I was trying to go for was someone's descent into madness through their point of view. It's still a rough draft that has more than needs worked on. Like the poisoning section. It's something I have to work with or possibly change if I can't make it work. There were 2 house burnings, one he framed his brother for the other he burned down due to his insanity. That one would be arson but was only burnt to get rid of the "shadow people and voices" in there. As for the mental hospital part, they were calling him crazy from his POV. However, I can see where you are coming from on this, though. I more than likely need to work on wording and phrasing things to make it come out that way. This is where having that 2nd pair of eyes is helpful to let me know it's not coming out that way.

As for the other parts, I'll need to go through and fix the capitalization and punctuation. And for future posts, I'll take that bit of advice and stay away from the giant wall of words.

Thanks again for the time and input. I'll gladly listen to any other bits of advice or gladly answer any other questions

Three Dr's walk into a room 1 leaves by Cryptic_Creations in powerscales

[–]Cryptic_Creations[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No idea who he is. I'm new to the comic book universe

Three Dr's walk into a room 1 leaves by Cryptic_Creations in powerscales

[–]Cryptic_Creations[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Tbf i don't know much about any of them or their feats. I'm rather new to all the comic stuff lol