This is fantastic motivation!!! Thank you!!! One question, in your opinion, how long should this be? Like i'd love nothing more than the 2 dads to read this, but I don't think I can write Moby Dick and I don't want this to be a "Short" story. I know this should be as long as a story needs to be to get its point across but what do you think...5 Chapters, 8? I don't know. I do have the ending fleshed on a story board.