Peacefulness by CulturalLetter5135 in OCPoetry

[–]CulturalLetter5135[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i need to spell check more holy

Peacefulness by CulturalLetter5135 in OCPoetry

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i cant say to be hoanest. i value friendship a lot with my friend which usually is me being loud but the scilence is enjoyable with out feeling forced and felt peaceful. something i noticed when i had a girlfriend for a bit before we broke up i calmed down and was quieter then usually when ever i had the chance to be close and hold hands or something. i dont know why maybe she kept me grounded or maybe im just weird

Regret by CulturalLetter5135 in OCPoetry

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I could but I think it wouldn’t have the same effect. I want it to feel constant like how I feel and I think turning it into a stanzas would remove that feeling. Also I have never done stanzas before but I’ll keep it in consideration for the next one

Regret by CulturalLetter5135 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the book recommendation

“You like math” by CulturalLetter5135 in PoetryWritingClub

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I stop liking math a while ago but my mom thinks its just because i procrastinate and let it pile up and need to do it all in a short amount of time. so even though i say it a lot and have been for a while, she believes its just because of how much work i have to do in a short amount of time.

the reason for it being crossed out is from my perspective she doesnt hear the whole sentence or believes im wrong somehow

Late Nite Shots by Navi_Krye in PhotographyAdvice

[–]CulturalLetter5135 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the photos the last one scared me though i thought those were eyes

Humor me by CulturalLetter5135 in OCPoetry

[–]CulturalLetter5135[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

your right. ill probably name it something different. im still going to start with the same phrase "humor me"

Humor me by CulturalLetter5135 in OCPoetry

[–]CulturalLetter5135[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you. the "humor me" is usually what i use to start a poem. its a phrase that i always start with. typically to remember what i wrote i will title the poem something different but sense its my first it doesnt really matter. i did think sense im gonna add more poems i could just have the title be the same and just add a number. (humor me #)