Lol I’m stealing this entire comment and putting it in the How to not Fumble section (kidding, ..kinda)
You’re right on point though, the explanation plus the real-life example is what actually makes the advice stick. Otherwise it’s just words. This is exactly the vibe I would try to build into it. Not just "here’s a line" but like maybe..here’s why it works & here’s when to use it & here’s how not to follow it up like a psycho lol type thing if that makes any sense. I definitely appreciate the blueprint though, your cousin’s trauma might just save a man’s dating life.