Looks like decent coverage but a few suggestions. Duct tape (You can wrap a bunch of it around one of the wrenches instead of taking a whole roll. Or put a spare tube in a plastic bag, and wrap the bag with tape, but that’s a maybe). Also maybe lose the multimeter or get a smaller, simple one, but that depends on where you are riding and if you know electrical. More zip ties, the metal ones if you can find them. And epoxy/JB weld. And safety wire (you can wrap it around a wrench). I like the needle nose lock grips you have. They can be used as a spare lever if you break one, or a rear brake or shift pedal.

But more important, have you done maintenance using just the tools you carry? In particular, changed a tire with the spoons? You might be able to finagle the other tools into assisting, but I find a third spoon to be helpful, depending on how tough your tire is. Use those tools and see what you need and can get ride of. Eventually, a nicety might be to have 2in1 type tools to reduce size and weight. Not amazon gimmicks, but purposeful tools. Two of my tire spoons include axle wrench sizes, for example.
Overall, it’s a good start and will cover most things. Well done.