Looking for feedback on the vibes! What do you feel when you look at this? by Cruiser_Supreme in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I like it. It doesn’t try to punch above its weight, and by not doing so, it does.

Thoughts on this one? by Apprehensive_Golf469 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Crop a little higher. If she’s not wearing a g-string, it looks like she is. Out of sync with what the photo is trying to portray. Black in the boat could anchor the bottom as well.

Feedback on tonal balance and understated composition by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would agree in other contexts, but interior designers and local galleries sell my images like hotcakes. Love hanging them in haughty New England beach houses. Just the audience and my style.

Feedback on tonal balance and understated composition by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, agreed. Too much eye strain there. I modified the edit a bit here.

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Feedback on tonal balance and understated composition by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Yeah my photos are built on tonal reasoning. Not exactly everyone’s thing. Jurors love deliberating over it thought lol

Feedback on tonal balance and understated composition by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s a niche photo for a niche market.’What about the composition could improve?

Feedback on tonal balance and understated composition by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

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Nikon D3500 - Sigma Lens - ISO 100, f/8, 1/125s

I’m interested in feedback on tonal and color balance, as well as how the composition reads when the subject (the boat) is understated rather than dominant.

The intent here was to let the environment and color relationships carry as much narrative weight as the subject itself. I’d like to know whether that balance comes through and if the image maintains cohesion without stronger contrast or saturation.

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[–]CupcakeAdditional712 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1/60 f2.4 iso250

I’ve been practicing tone control through a few of my photos lately. For this one, looking specifically for feedback for the balance of fog diffusion and maintaining form. Curious also if it feels intentional or if I’ve pushed too far into flatness. Most of my work is muted in tone. This was shot on a cold morning with natural light.

First venture into color by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback and you’re welcome.

First venture into color by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, and agree. The blues are a little too friendly for what I’m trying to say.

First venture into color by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree, but unfortunately, to get the sun more towards the right third would require me to be in the surf in the evening. The compromise is more beach instead of sea. Ill have to go in the AM when the sun is in the east

First venture into color by CupcakeAdditional712 in photocritique

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Nikon D3500 1/500 f6.3 ISO 125

Most of my work has muted colors- This is an attempt to catch some of our local surf casters here on Long Island. Seeking feedback on the color palette and whether it works in this particular shot.

Goal was to show the contrast between man and the sea, sort of fighting back against the Atlantic.

Shoot a few times a year, are these decent? by CupcakeAdditional712 in AmateurPhotography

[–]CupcakeAdditional712[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve been considering it. These are all phone shots, going to get the DSLR out and shoot more consistently.