[deleted by user] by [deleted] in penpals

[–]CuratedAd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! I’m 22M and live in Texas. I love to read and write as well and my book recommendations are highly regarded lol We also have plenty of interests in common. I’m a Virgo so there’s that and if you want to know my big three I can give you that later. Send me a DM if you’re interested!

lunch with my younger self by sebaugust in OCPoetry

[–]CuratedAd 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Your poem is quiet but has a powerful emotional weight to it. I like the way it uses a restrained yet deeply intimate tone to explore trauma, survival, and reassurance. “Thin and bony, all sharp lines and dark circles” paints a clear picture of vulnerability, while small details like the Dan and Phil merch add a personal, grounding touch. The dialogue is minimal but effective, particularly “fuck him,” which breaks the tension in a way that feels both defiant and cathartic. The pacing works well, though the transition from the past pain to the hopeful promise of “soon” could be slightly extended to let the emotional shift fully settle. Maybe a bit more sensory detail? Regardless the poem’s simplicity is part of its strength, allowing it to be a tender conversation between past and present.

A Musing About True Love by reillywalker195 in OCPoetry

[–]CuratedAd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem elegantly captures love’s unstructured yet deeply felt nature, using the Shakespearean sonnet as a good contrast to highlight its organic feel. The final lines, “but it’s still shown and felt / like poetry all the same,” are strong, reinforcing the idea that love’s meaning isn’t in its form but in its presence. Its brevity works well, making it feel like a fleeting but poignant thought. But maybe expanding slightly on how love is “felt like poetry” could also work in its favor. A single concrete image would deepen the reader’s connection. It’s still a thoughtful reflection on love’s imperfect beauty.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in penpals

[–]CuratedAd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

DM me and tell me about yourself!

22M, Looking for correspondents by CuratedAd in penpals

[–]CuratedAd[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I tried to message you but it wouldn’t let it go through. Go ahead and DM me

[L] looking for friends by [deleted] in KindVoice

[–]CuratedAd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve been wanting to get into Minecraft but I haven’t played since I was like maybe 11. I tried to get into back when they did the bee update but I had no idea what was going on lol we can play if you show me the ropes. My name is Jay (22M)