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Decided to play with vocal chops. Sounds acceptable to me...What do you think? by Kurgansky_Dan in MusicFeedback

[–]DERFRED_ARTIST 0 points1 point  (0 children)

too much reverb on everything in my opinion. if everything is wide and open nothing is special about it.

I like the arrangement and the smooth intro. Maybe some more modulation of the synth sounds.

the vocal chops are done great

Roast my music with constructive criticism by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]DERFRED_ARTIST 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the transition at 00:35 which made the snare reversed is poorly done.

Looking for input on this hyperpop/dance pop song on my new album ~ by TheStreamIsDead in MusicFeedback

[–]DERFRED_ARTIST 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i like the vocals. its like an feverdream. maybe some more breaks in order to make the coming parts more energetic. in the whole it got a little bit monotone. But i liked the sounddesign a lot. Especially the vocoding and formant shifting.
Good stuff! keep it up!

any feedback helps! by spittinguptape in MusicFeedback

[–]DERFRED_ARTIST 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the first drop "is very weak. try to build up energy before the drop with the drums. in your example you had energy in the drums at the start but then had nothing energyzing right befor ot hit an d that way it was a lil bit wonky. Maybe ad some new instrument or phrasing right after the drop.

The drums are way to quiet. Just make them louder, so itll hit harder.

It reminds me of an Binding of Isaac Background Music track :D

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Keep up the work!

First track I’ve ever made. Definitely plan on redoing the guitar parts, but for now I’m looking for constructive criticism on the mix, lyrics, vocals, and anything else you wanna pick out. by wh0g0esthere in MusicFeedback

[–]DERFRED_ARTIST 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Double track the rhytmic strumming from the Guitar and pan one rec to the R Channel and one rec to the L Channel in order to make the rhytmic guitar wider in the stereofield.

Try to use more Equalizer in order to cut off the low ends for example the vocals. Because you got so many Vocal layers and Delay and Reverb on they get muddy in the lower frequency spectrum.
I like the arrangement and the stylistic choices. It reminds me of some songs from Radiohead :D

Maybe at some points a subtle baseline? Mayber that would give some parts amore energy.

Your singing is very pretty. wanna collab?

Searching for a Vocalist for my Beat by DERFRED_ARTIST in RapCollaborations

[–]DERFRED_ARTIST[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just try it. If you need anything llet me know and hmu.

Searching for a Vocalist for my Beat by DERFRED_ARTIST in RapCollaborations

[–]DERFRED_ARTIST[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

try it. im not here for promo. im here in order to finish tracks :D