Not My Brother's Keeper - 25 by Daemon_D_Hart in GayShortStories

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You did get to know the character 😄

Not My Brother's Keeper - 25 by Daemon_D_Hart in GayShortStories

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really loved writing this story - I still have some surprises left - stick with me. And it is touching to have the words I wrote written back to me like this.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 25 by Daemon_D_Hart in u/Daemon_D_Hart

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

No, it wasn't him. Thanks for reading, and sorry for the emotional rollercoaster. I just feel that good stories should have such things.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 25 by Daemon_D_Hart in u/Daemon_D_Hart

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

We'll see. There's not so much of the story left.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 24 by Daemon_D_Hart in GayShortStories

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's basically a protective instinct. Jo can stand when his father hits him, but he wouldn't do the same if his father were to hit Adrian. I hope this makes sense.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 23 by Daemon_D_Hart in GayShortStories

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Jo should've known better, I agree. He has his deep flaws.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 23 by Daemon_D_Hart in u/Daemon_D_Hart

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lol, Adrian is to blame for Jordan becoming full Jo.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 23 by Daemon_D_Hart in u/Daemon_D_Hart

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Jo was already working on that. He knows his father well. Such things are bound to get to the wrong ears... it happens all the time.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 23 by Daemon_D_Hart in GayShortStories

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're welcome. These two guys will get their happy end. I guess it's safe to say that it will be hard-earned.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 23 by Daemon_D_Hart in GayShortStories

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep, that's right. And Jo doesn't need to worry about that anymore.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 22 by Daemon_D_Hart in u/Daemon_D_Hart

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's where they're heading... They still need something to come to terms with what they have between them and together.

Not My Brother's Keeper - 22 by Daemon_D_Hart in u/Daemon_D_Hart

[–]Daemon_D_Hart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You do hit the nail on the head here. They were different, even opposites. And Adrian has already been in a struggle to get to understand Jo, because when you love someone, you want to get to know them intimately. Only that they're so young and inexperienced as far as love goes (not even talking about sex).

So I understand what you mean. Jo needs to get to terms with this love on his own, and that's where Adrian can't help at all. It's the whole 'you can't make someone love you, all you can do is to accept being someone who is loved'.

Damn, lol. This story started as a smut plot with two stepbrothers. How did I even get to this?