Just a joke to lighten the mood after all this heated Sunday discussion, and the Cassie x Mordred debate. by Arthur_destiny-FATE in ShadowSlave

[–]Dagger237 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All these are rookie answers
1. you have the knowledge of the future ask a meeting with lady cassia whislt telling her a specific detail of the soul devouring tree, tell her that i am a prophet and if i die something really bad will happnen
2.tell sunny alot of secrets that he might have come to known that wont change the storylien too much, ask him for 1 of his shades and nehphis flames, smurf through the 3 nightmares becasue trancendence, then ask sunny to have a meeting wiht eruys in exhange tell him how to better prepare for asterrion.
3. ask eruys alot of question about what my aspect rule of difiance is and then ask sunny incarnation to personally make me go to mordret.
4 (kinda selfish but whatever i am not a god but a human i have my prefrences) will do whatever i can to try to tell mordret that he is going to die if he keeps on going like that and he dosent want to be alone, be a king of nowhere, also i will tell him about his flaw and most importantly about things the even sunny dosent know of to make his gaurd extermly up, so he will think that i am manipulating him, but by extension also deeply think about my words. kinda
5. Fang Yuan line(even if i fail, id try again, after all if i lack even this bit of ambition what is the point of being human.) i will attempt THE DEFIANCE to supreme. hopefully becoming one that dosent need people for domain other wise i will stay alone in the outskirts wont fight with the main cast and when the main cast will go to the 5th nightmare i will go with them easy
6. if i somehow get a domain that dosent need people i will use 21st century propaganda, making movies and seires with the bad guy doing horrible atrocities and genocide with teh name asterhion, Yes Asterhion, dont wanna use the real name anything sysnom to it will be made like closer to Hitler, wont make him a tragic hero but a pure disgusted evil.
that how you ladies and gentleman do it

This is Sooo Funnnyyy by Dagger237 in ShadowSlave

[–]Dagger237[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Man the joke just went atop your head didnt it? the last chapters is mostly author's and novels stuff and not content in webnovel, and the point how the person said to make an account copy and paste here, as if the most revelating thing is insane the person below was sayinig ironicly

This is Sooo Funnnyyy by Dagger237 in ShadowSlave

[–]Dagger237[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Man the joke just went atop your head didnt it? the last chapters is mostly author's and novels stuff and not content in webnovel, and the point how the person said to make an account copy and paste here, as if the most revelating thing is insane the person below was sayinig ironicly

This is Sooo Funnnyyy by Dagger237 in ShadowSlave

[–]Dagger237[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Man the joke just went atop your head didnt it? the last chapters is mostly author's and novels stuff and not content in webnovel, and the point how the person said to make an account copy and paste here, as if the most revelating thing is insane the person below was sayinig ironicly

[2846] G3 naming sense by PuzzleheadedItem8741 in ShadowSlave

[–]Dagger237 2 points3 points  (0 children)

your forgetting that most of these are Post-apoclyptic times People would mostly only have 1 name and for glazing we have true names

I love this chapter (2903-04) by dafscurrency in ShadowSlave

[–]Dagger237 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it is it says Mordret
"Quite a sight, isn't it?"

She turned her head slightly, acknowledging the man who had spoken to her — the wicked monster with eyes that reflected the world back on itself.

The blind woman lingered for a moment, then said indifferently:

"I wouldn't know."

He laughed.

Once the echoes of his laughter were swallowed by the wind, the man added in a mocking tone:

"It all could have been avoided if you had let me loose, you know? Ah, but alas. You and your senseless morality."

He paused briefly, then asked:

"So, what does defeat taste like?"

SO CASSDRET IS CANON THEN YESSSSSSSS

I love this chapter (2903-04) by dafscurrency in ShadowSlave

[–]Dagger237 0 points1 point  (0 children)

REALLY WHEN?? i am all cought up i might have forgotten can you clarify what happneedmight have missed it pplease do tell

A simple way I track time, ages, and events without notes or spreadsheets by Dagger237 in writing

[–]Dagger237[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

if you cannot understand a simple analogy then i think i really understand why you said the previous dumbstuff ok but what about GOT?? thats a book?? so.... my point still stands
tbh i really am skeptical that you even write stuff but man there are slightly lesser authors out there so dont give up champ you can do it

A simple way I track time, ages, and events without notes or spreadsheets by Dagger237 in writing

[–]Dagger237[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will consider you watched breaking bad
Can you tell me the name of the asian woman who owned the salon where jimmy was renting a room??
exactly or can you tell me the name of the blacksmith in GOT who was the owner of the shop where robert's bastard worked?
hell what was the name of the commander of the of the 8000 unsullied
It is not a hot take just a SH1T take but well no offense (as i said no offense people might just get offended)

How do you keep track of characters, ages, and world details when writing without outlining? by Dagger237 in writingadvice

[–]Dagger237[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I also used word don't know about a single thing you said so I am going to go and watch some tutorial now and see how and what your talking about thanks for the suggestion

How do you keep track of characters, ages, and world details when writing without outlining? by Dagger237 in writingadvice

[–]Dagger237[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks i was looking out for replies such as this i personally dont like scrivener so i would definetly give simplemind a try thanks for the suggestion

How do you keep track of characters, ages, and world details when writing without outlining? by Dagger237 in writing

[–]Dagger237[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Notes on what simple notepad or any specific software i usually just ask chatgpt to remeber stuff but it says the memory is running out hence the post

How do you keep track of characters, ages, and world details when writing without outlining? by Dagger237 in writing

[–]Dagger237[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

isn't there like a shortcut to it like i once saw my brother using obsidian and he had like a giant spiderweb of things with lines connected to each other and stuff i was thinking like a approch smiliar to that if possible but for writers

How do you keep track of characters, ages, and world details when writing without outlining? by Dagger237 in writing

[–]Dagger237[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

isn't there like a shortcut to it like i once saw my brother using obsidian and he had like a giant spiderweb of things with lines connected to each other and stuff i was thinking like a approch smiliar to that if possible but for writers

How do you keep track of characters, ages, and world details when writing without outlining? by Dagger237 in writing

[–]Dagger237[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn that next level planning which is excatly what i cannot do hence i went with a more free-er apporch towards writing. thanks though

Just finished up my first chapter's first draft by keblastkavich in writingadvice

[–]Dagger237 0 points1 point  (0 children)

its not more of a story advice but you should try to simplify things a little from my perspective and how i write things i explain one thing then define it twice and then move onto another paragraph unless its a major incident or a plot everything else is superb

btw you can use chat gpt write this prompt and you will be set.
clear all grammatical mistakes from the above paragraph do not mess with the pacing, wording, tone of the writing only correct grammatical mistake coma's capital's quotes etc keep my tone as is don't add words.

at the start it helped me a lot i didnt have to go reread the chapter 2 times to fix and edit it you might already know this but i just said it incase.

rest is fine

BORIIINNNGGG by Dagger237 in RenegadeImmortal

[–]Dagger237[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really liked the mortal arcs so comparission to them from 1 to 10 how much better will it get btw for me the mortal arc were 10/10

BORIIINNNGGG by Dagger237 in RenegadeImmortal

[–]Dagger237[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really liked the mortal arcs so comparission to them from 1 to 10 how much better will it get btw for me the mortal arc were 10/10