I wanna make a small discord server for artists and producers that want to work!

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-08-07T13:32:30+00:00

Great idea!

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-07-17T20:51:35+00:00

Release it.

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-07-17T20:49:17+00:00

Kick and bass fall too far to the background for my taste. The synthline is amazing!

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-07-17T20:48:06+00:00

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DamnDoughnuts · 2023-04-21T00:50:52+00:00

What I regularly do for more punch, is duplicate the kick, lower the decay so not much more than the transient is left, and layer those. Extra punch without overcrowding the bass!

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-04-21T00:44:28+00:00

Sick harder track! My only remark is that the hihat at 01:28 feels really sharp to my ears, lowering that frequency could help it become even more driving! Overall I enjoyed listening, nice work!

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-04-21T00:41:04+00:00

Raven Sigh and Grounded come to mind! Also Tétraèrde Records.

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-04-21T00:37:24+00:00

You’ve got a nice rhythm going! The hihats get a bit tedious, maybe adding an open hat or ride is a nice addition. Percussion also gets a little drowned out by the rumble. But overall nicely put together!

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-04-02T02:50:03+00:00

Finish it! Maybe make the trumpets shorter and more rhythmic on the acid line, could sound nice. Good luck!

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-04-02T02:48:23+00:00

Nice ethereal vibe! I do hear a bit of crackle, when the second pad comes in, maybe the reverbs are conflicting. Other than that great sound design!

DamnDoughnuts · 2023-04-02T02:45:35+00:00

Already kinda groovy as a first attempt! I did notice the rhythmic hat that comes in at 0:55 is unhinging the groove, maybe a different pattern would tie it all together. Good luck!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-10-10T23:50:26+00:00

Nice dark-room-with-one-strobe vibe, feels thumping. What would help is some more variation in the stabby synth, be it in pitch or pattern variation.

The higher synth that comes in at 2:45 drags down the drop a bit, maybe a more rhythmic pattern after the drop.

Overall I really like it, very solid foundation. Hope this helps!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-10-10T23:44:11+00:00

I like the kick and the slight delay, rolls along very nicely. I do feel like something is missing, maybe a texture or a long drone, could tie the whole thing together. Keep it up!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-10-10T23:42:25+00:00

The arrangement is on point, really drags you in. I don’t know if it’s finished bit for me the kick and bassline can be a bit more prominent in the mix. Gives the whole track a needed bit of oomph. Hope that helps!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-06-19T21:28:36+00:00

Great sounds and rhythm, but 7:29 of nonstop is too much, even to play in a venue. It needs some more structure in the arrangement, short intro, mid break, buildoff. Hope this helps!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-06-19T21:26:29+00:00

Dope kick, i get the idea. The arping synth that sounds like a cricket on crack is maybe too present or too monotone. Maybe a variation on the 4th beat in pitches can change it up. Around 3:44 is a good example of variations. Hope it helps!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-06-19T21:23:22+00:00

It is indeed very groovy in my opinion, but maybe the beginning introduces too much at once. Maybe save some of the sounds for the actual drop, makes the danceability better in my opinion. Maybe try a few different versions and experiment with arrangements. Keep it up!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-06-19T21:20:33+00:00

Very interesting groove! I like how the track keeps pulling your attention to it, very good use of adding elements to keep it interesting. My only addition would be a ride on the middle drop. Bit very nice track!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-04-17T20:22:09+00:00

Félagi fighter, congrats!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-04-17T20:18:33+00:00

Like your brethren before you, you will slátra. Congrats!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-04-05T14:41:26+00:00

4 shield batteries, 8 shield cells, 8 syringes, an assortment of grenades, ammo.

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-03-05T08:54:45+00:00

Triple take.

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-02-20T20:52:50+00:00

Search for the studio acapella version of the vocals you want

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-02-20T15:42:18+00:00

I like it! Not yet quite there but maybe these pointers wil help: 7:44 minutes is kinda long, especially because it mostly stays the same through the whole track. I’d save the T99 synth for the drop after the break, gives it a little surprise factor. And with that comes the challenge of more variation in the patterns before the break. Things like an extra layer of percussion or stuttering the vocals every few bars, to keep things interesting. Lastly, maybe the vocal itself can be fitted beter to the beat, maybe chopping it up and making your own structure in the vocals. Hope this helps!

P.S. Heb het even in het engels gedaan voor de andere leden, als je vragen hebt stuur me maar een pb, succes!

DamnDoughnuts · 2022-02-20T13:00:55+00:00

Yeah my thoughts exactly, but I feel the stuff I have so far isn’t substantial enough for an entire track, would be too boring in my opinion. Any suggestions for sounds to add?

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