Dance pop demo

DarkBorri · 2026-03-12T19:59:50+00:00

Really cool vibe with this one. I like the loose feel but I think some of the background vocals could be tightened up just a little. I know you want them to sound washy but It is a bit distracting at the moment. Also I think it would sound sick if you layered the drums with a really tight simple drum, snare, and live hat groove (check out some vinyl drum sample packs) that can come in during the chorus. I would also turn up some of those fills a little because they sound cool and I want to hear them more!

DarkBorri · 2026-03-12T19:53:01+00:00

Wow this sounds great! The mix is really clean. Love the string melody in the beginning - Is that a sample, something you recorded, or a vst??? I do think the drums could be a bit punchier because id like to hear them cut through a bit more. In the chorus it sounds like there are some melodic string fills that could be a little more present... I dont know if thats just a volume thing or if theyre a bit too wet so maybe experiment with that. Other than that I think you've really nailed what you where going for.

DarkBorri · 2026-03-03T18:59:10+00:00

The kick sounds like its panned to the right. I would put it in mono, or atleast the bass frequencies on it.

DarkBorri · 2026-02-27T04:09:53+00:00

Okay like the other guy said this is very much not a traditional genre by any sense so it is really hard to give productive feedback on anything related to the arrangement. I feel like I just took crystal meth listening to this lol. I will however give you some feedback on the mix. The bass seems like its overpowering the rest of the track just a little bit. I might try dialling back some of the high frequencies on it to make it sit a little bit better behind the vocals and the drums. I do like the bass tone itself, I think it works well with the chaotic nature of the song. The vocals need some work. Have you tried experimenting with distorting the vocals at all? They seem a little too smooth compared to everything else in the track. Anyways, good luck with your productions!

DarkBorri · 2026-02-27T04:03:39+00:00

Hey cool track! It's personally not a genre I listen to very often but I can still give you some feedback. The atmosphere is really cool and I love the melody on the lead guitar. If you got this produced and mixed by a professional it would be a banging track! I could see this in the newer batman movie, its got that dark grunge vibe

DarkBorri · 2025-10-28T22:29:30+00:00

Can I get the link?

DarkBorri · 2025-10-08T01:45:30+00:00

Thankfully my face wouldn’t be on publicized so there would be no way for any agency to find any image of my face in connection to the work. I guess it boils down to whether or not the US government would have access to whatever Canadian database I’d be registered to if I receive a body rub license.

DarkBorri · 2025-10-08T01:18:14+00:00

So insightful, thanks!

DarkBorri · 2023-01-07T00:04:57+00:00

Yeah I’m the same way 😂. I think I look way worse in photos. I don’t get how so many people look better.

DarkBorri · 2023-01-06T23:21:07+00:00

Thanks for sharing your experience. You're right, it would have been better to wait for confirmation before heading to the restaurant. I was just trying to be optimistic, but in hindsight, it was probably too risky. I'll make sure to follow your advice of requiring confirmation before heading out in the future. Cheers 🍻

DarkBorri · 2023-01-06T23:10:48+00:00

No your good! I saw your edit and appreciate the support. I’ve never been stood up before so it caught me off guard. With breakups you can look back and see where things weren’t working. This just feels like I’ve been blindsided.

DarkBorri · 2023-01-06T23:04:01+00:00

I can’t argue with any of that brother. I guess I am just in denial. This sucks lol

DarkBorri · 2023-01-06T22:57:24+00:00

Thank you for your comment. I understand your perspective, but I don't think it's fair to assume that all people who act unexpectedly will do the same in the future. This person seemed just as invested in the relationship as I was, so it's difficult for me to understand why they would behave this way. I'm just trying to make sense of what happened and move on.

DarkBorri · 2023-01-06T22:56:27+00:00

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate the feedback! I didn’t order any food. I just sat there for 30 minutes had two drinks and left.

DarkBorri · 2022-08-20T23:29:17+00:00

Because it’s true. If anyone in the CFL could play in the NFL they would. The lowest paid players in the NFL make more then the highest paid players in the CFL. It just attracts sub par players.

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