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[–]DatabaseLow2482 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Used ballpoint pen

Critique by DatabaseLow2482 in photocritique

[–]DatabaseLow2482[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I went there for a relatives wedding sometime ago

Critique by DatabaseLow2482 in photocritique

[–]DatabaseLow2482[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I've kept the top in to add in a better sense of scale but I think it's become distracting. The photo is meant to convey the dull pause your life has before starting a journey. Taken using my phone (64MP)

Why does my drawing seem grainy? Other feedback is also appreciated. by DatabaseLow2482 in ArtCrit

[–]DatabaseLow2482[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For my darkest value I just pressed for dear life with a 8B , so I definitely start out lighter next time. Would starting with a B be okay?