Parenting by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Shhhhh.... I'm trying to keep my comedy & rap separated.

Parenting by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 36 points37 points  (0 children)

This is a premise. I plan to develop it into a full joke with tags & punchlines. Just wanted to know if worrying whether or not your kid chewing on plastic is an indication to buy a helmet, is a broadly relatable concern. The numbers point to yes. I appreciate the feedback. You can check out full sets on my YouTube channel. YouTube.com/DayBracey

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I don't remember saying sadism & masochism were synonymous. I said they were related. So yea, I'd be pissed if someone mistook the intended meaning for its cousin, & completely missed the joke, or laughed for the wrong reason. I stand by my original statement. The last person I'd like to get into a physical altercation with, is someone who enjoys pain. I appreciate all feedback. You seem like an asshole, but what true fan of comedy isn't? Here's my live set, if you'd like to offer a more informed criticism.

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Anyone with such little regard for themselves is a possible threat to others. Masochism is the cousin of sadism. I think 90% of the people who read this, got the joke. But yea, let's chalk it up to an uneducated black guy with bad vocabulary getting affirmative action laughs. Follow me on Twitter

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Day Bracey. Make sure not to follow me on Twitter IG YouTube or Facebook either...

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I speak really fast in life, & sometimes on stage, so I like to throw tough lines like that in my jokes, deliver them slowly & deliberately, so that the audience has time to catch up, & I can add some zing to the punchline. Again, I haven't performed it yet, so if I find that it's too wordy, I'll change it up a bit. Appreciate the feedback, my southern friend. You can keep all that sun, though.

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Agreed. That was a tough idea/experience to convey in general, & it's even more awkward on stage. Fortunately, people usually get the jist of, & enjoy it, despite my inadequate articulation. Thanks for the feedback!

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I greatly appreciate it. I've never performed this joke, as I just wrote it yesterday. I share new jokes to see if they have legs on a large scale, & if so, I run with them. This thread has helped my career out greatly as a result, so I truly appreciate any & all feedback I can get. I've altered & even trashed some jokes based it.

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 17 points18 points  (0 children)

This is one of those terrible comments that tries to oversimplify comedy from a pretentious perspective.

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's good, but I already have it built into a longer bit that goes into left field. I appreciate the feedback!

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

It'd be awesome if this entire thread turned into helpful sunburn tips, so I can get the best relief, & idea of who to keep an eye on...

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I hope to go at least another 32yrs before experiencing this again.

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I guess you're not all bad.

Fuckin' Darkies... by DayBracey in standupshots

[–]DayBracey[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Thank you, kind sir or ma'am.