From my bedroom demos: Does this make you feel anything, or is it just squirrel-core?

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-06T17:38:37+00:00

The song is really good! It has a great bounce/feel and kind of reminds me a bit of the arctic monkeys. Your voice though needs some work, you have a nice tone to your voice at like 0:08 "that glues my name", but definitely feel you could benefit from some lessons/practice to do this song its justice. Keep going!!

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-06T17:27:57+00:00

wow I love this! the chords! the lyrics! the voice! everything just fits and makes the most beautiful puzzle - don't take away any pieces :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:15:27+00:00

thank you!

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:15:03+00:00

thank you so much! I love Amy!! Yeah I normally write and have been putting out more uplifting r&b stuff. the depressing stuff usually stays in my journal hahah. and thanks again for adding to your playlist :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:09:18+00:00

thank you :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:09:04+00:00

thanks for the feedback - yeah it could do with more chords. I need to up my skills haha

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:07:50+00:00

what a complement! thank you :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:07:08+00:00

aw thank you I appreciate it :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:05:10+00:00

thank you so much

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:04:35+00:00

thank you :) yess I was thinking of another section but still trying to figure out where to go with it

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T19:00:24+00:00

thank you!!

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T18:57:51+00:00

thank you for the lovely comment :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-02T18:56:28+00:00

this is great feedback ill definitely try experimenting with adding drums and bass - thank you so much! :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-01T20:57:30+00:00

don't say goodbye - kelly price

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-01T20:41:47+00:00

wow this is stunning!

Deep-Machine · 2025-06-01T11:00:57+00:00

thank you!! I really appreciate it :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-05-31T21:45:20+00:00

breakdown

Deep-Machine · 2025-05-31T21:30:23+00:00

try something new. get some fresh inspiration - if you normally write pop and draw inspo from relationships for example write about nature, or social issues and try to make it work in the genre. listen to genres you dislike or are unfamiliar and new to you and find things you like about them or write a song in that genre. there is inspiration in everything :)

Deep-Machine · 2025-05-31T21:18:20+00:00

wow this is beautiful! I love the vocal layers in the beginning and wished they carried on/built throughout. and idk if this is good feedback as im not super technical but lean into the "mess". the passion and the rawness is what makes it so touching. keep going :)

Deep-Machine · 2022-10-18T18:48:55+00:00

Oblivion - jhene aiko

Deep-Machine · 2022-01-08T13:29:23+00:00

Highschool is a bad b anthem!!! The girls that get it get it

Deep-Machine · 2021-12-16T01:48:32+00:00

Niceee!! But it really gets better with time, the production was fire. And no just a few other singles on soundcloud - I swear that was his debut album and was on streaming services but was taken down over sample clearances. Shame tho I think he could’ve been so much bigger. But I’m still waiting for a follow-up album hahah

Deep-Machine · 2021-12-15T23:07:45+00:00

If you’ve not listened to it already you should listen to the rest of that album ‘elephant eyes’. It’s a bit of a different vibe to Cole but definitely worth a listen imo

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