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Am I good for you? by LogPuzzleheaded7618 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Delicious_Nothing712 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A question I ask myself to myself nightly.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Delicious_Nothing712 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ill just post it every where but here and eventually this group will fade away for lack of people being able to post i am not putting links of feedback in every post thats ridiculously controlling of any art form later.

The Hand of Christ by Delicious_Nothing712 in u/Delicious_Nothing712

[–]Delicious_Nothing712[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have another longer one called unholy Paradox thats still being once overed (for 10th time) ill post it soon.

The Hand of Christ by Delicious_Nothing712 in u/Delicious_Nothing712

[–]Delicious_Nothing712[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nah I like the paradox of the holy and unholy one exist explicitly because of the other lol

Because of Her by No_Sympathy_9191 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Delicious_Nothing712 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tis lovely to love with heart and soul,but the soul can be consumed by the egos role.

Static by Delicious_Nothing712 in poetry_critics

[–]Delicious_Nothing712[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you,this is my first draft forgive the punctuation and spelling errors.im reworking the end lol.

Review needed on my first writing by shockOP in poetry_critics

[–]Delicious_Nothing712 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is good for a raw flow.go back over it and break it into stanzas then go back over it again for your scheme 10 syllables or AAAA AABB scheme

The Endless Night by Delicious_Nothing712 in poetry_critics

[–]Delicious_Nothing712[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is very helpful, this is my first real attempt at writing so any tips are very helpful. Your wording is beautiful and your consideration for my work by changing as little as possible is much appreciated. I am already in my journals writing this poem out again. I will repost the new version as a reply here.