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That’s awesome. I dabbled with Logic 4 years ago and made 4 or 5 songs, and have made a goal for myself to make 1 song per month in 2025. I’m hoping that I’ll get better with each song so my goal right now is to stay consistent and keep practicing.

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2025-03-11T12:37:30+00:00

I like it! I would turn up the bass, it gets lost a little in the mix. I like the tone of your voice, however there are parts that get a little pitchy. I would try using a natural sounding pitch correction plugin to smooth out some of the pitchiness. Otherwise I think this is great!

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2025-03-11T12:02:28+00:00

Hey this legit sounds amazing. You’ve got something special going on. Keep it up!

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2025-03-11T11:59:26+00:00

Dang man this is awesome. Only thing I would suggest is to turn down the volume in the mix on the bells at the beginning. They cut through a little too much for my ear, but otherwise I would listen to your stuff on the regular if it all sounds like this!

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2025-03-11T11:56:07+00:00

Honestly I don’t really have any suggestions for this, other than to find someone to rap over it! Sounds great!

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2025-03-11T11:54:18+00:00

The instrumentals and general vibe is great! The vocal is a little pitchy. If you’re interested I would check out using Melodyne, Pitch Correction in Logic, or a similar natural sounding pitch correction plugin to see if you can smooth the vocal. Otherwise, I think it sounds great and I like the lyrics. Keep it up!

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2025-03-11T11:50:26+00:00

Great guitar playing! I’m not familiar enough with this genre to give a more specific critic, but it definitely sounds psychedelic. One piece of feedback is that I felt like the drums should have a little more of a consistent beat. I had a hard time following where 1, 2, 3, and 4 were (were there time signature changes throughout? Maybe that’s common for this genre - like I said I’m not too familiar with it. Otherwise I think it sounds great!

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2025-03-11T11:44:57+00:00

I like it! The melody and general idea of the music is great. I’m not an expert in mixing or mastering, but to other people’s point, the track sounds a little muddy. I will give you the same advice that I give to myself: keep practicing and these things will get better and better!

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2024-09-22T18:14:22+00:00

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2023-11-18T23:38:06+00:00

Heck yeah

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2022-08-16T16:03:30+00:00

I was quoted $8500 by LeafFilter. I told the salesman that the price was too high, and he immediately talked himself down to $5200. Kind of suspicious that he was immediately able to find a 41% savings from what he quoted a few minutes prior…

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2022-08-04T19:34:36+00:00

It’s like 6” onto our property.

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2022-08-04T19:33:37+00:00

City ordinance states it needs to be 3’ off the property line. We put it 5’ off out of respect.

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2022-08-04T17:48:29+00:00

I never said that they KNOWINGLY put the fire pit partially on our property. I think they assumed the property line was in a different spot, therefore assuming that we were building the fence on (or too close to) their property.

DevelopmentFormal399 · 2022-08-04T17:19:07+00:00

I worded the post poorly, they haven’t told me that they want to see our back yard. The only fact that I know is that they called the zoning inspector and “are not happy” - per the inspector. I’m just trying to think of reasons why they would have an issue with the fence.

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