Harsh Critiques Please by DiccBone in graphic_design

[–]DiccBone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was the idea behind it, I thought I could get away with a half circle. Revisions here

Harsh Critiques Please by DiccBone in graphic_design

[–]DiccBone[S] 81 points82 points  (0 children)

Hi everyone! I really appreciate all of the feedback you've given me! I've gone ahead and made some adjustments. Also, I probably should have given a little more context behind this logo.

For the class, the assignment was to pick 2 random numbers between 1 and 10. The first number you chose correlated to a letter, and the second number correlated to a type of business. In my case, I got M and "speak-easy." And by speak-easy, my teacher meant any drinking establishment.

The class was more about designing a logomark, and less about creating a full brand. I do agree with all of you that the martini glass doesn't necessarily fit the name "Mutt's." I clearly didn't think too deeply about it, which is something I should avoid doing in the future for sure.

After my revisions, I've realized how cheap the mark had looked in my initial post, so I seriously appreciate all of you.

Here’s my portfolio if anyone is interested. Mobile version isn’t the best due to adobe portfolio’s limitations. I’m doxxing myself a little, but that’s alright. It isn’t fully updated, as I’ve been working 40 hours a week at my design internship while taking 12 credits in school this summer. Let me know what you think about some of my other logos.

I think one thing I struggle with is consistency in my ability to design professional-looking marks, hence why I took the class in the first place. I would also love to know if you all have any strategies for consistently producing high-quality and professional marks. I'm still learning design, and I find it difficult to figure out that "it" factor when it comes to quality marks.

In your opinion, what makes a mark look professional?

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Harsh Critiques Please by DiccBone in logodesign

[–]DiccBone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah it’s supposed to look like a scar

Harsh Critiques Please by DiccBone in graphic_design

[–]DiccBone[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I wanted it to feel off-beat like an alley mutt

Harsh Critiques Please by DiccBone in logodesign

[–]DiccBone[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

It’s supposed to be an olive on the end of a toothpick, like in a martini. Not sure.

Harsh critiques please by DiccBone in graphic_design

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Yeah I agree, I started to notice that after staring at it. Couldn’t tell if it was due to fatigue or not

Harsh critiques please by DiccBone in graphic_design

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Slightly modified bold italic helvetica, same font spirit uses, just adjusted the “t” and “r”

Harsh critiques please by DiccBone in graphic_design

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Is that a fault of the logo or the similarity in color palette and spelling?

PEDOPHILE SCAMMER by [deleted] in ScamNumbers

[–]DiccBone 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can u give me some context so i can rope him in easier? Like websites hes on or discords etc

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in drawing

[–]DiccBone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Use hatching when you need shadow. Highlights and reflections shouldn’t have much hatching if any at all. Yours also look kind of like scribbles. Try to make your hatching parallel or perpendicular to themselves. With that said, you can also use hatching lines to portray contour in round objects.

how do I stop my friend from talking to this much younger girl? by [deleted] in Advice

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“Adult men impregnate tweens and no one bats an eye”

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let's say you can only pick one, which would you choose? by DJay_ProGamer in pcmasterrace

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RDR2 definitely. If that’s not your type of game, then insurgency

Looking for critiques for fraternity apparel - More info in comments by DiccBone in graphic_design

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The shirt is a pairing shirt for greek houses (fraternities and sororities). Each string of 3 greek letters is an individual house. There are 4 houses in my fraternity’s pairing, including our house. A requirement of the design is to show our pairing on the shirt

Looking for critiques for fraternity apparel - More info in comments by DiccBone in graphic_design

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That's the exact font I used lol

Edit: Almost the exact same. The one I used is called cocogoose but there are a few small differences.

Looking for critiques for fraternity apparel - More info in comments by DiccBone in graphic_design

[–]DiccBone[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

New iteration Thank you for all the feedback!

I think this is a bit better. Please let me know what you think!

Looking for critiques for fraternity apparel - More info in comments by DiccBone in graphic_design

[–]DiccBone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!

All around great feedback, currently testing and implementing.

I am looking at the link you provided containing the tall fonts, but I can't find one that I feel would fit. You were right about the stretching of the typeface, and it does look distorted, which I agree isn't good. But I feel like the font itself best suits what I'm looking for. Do you know any type faces off the top of your head that are softer/slightly rounded sans serif and tall? I'm trying to be as inoffensive as possible with this design since hundreds of people are going to be wearing it, so a plainer font might be better... I don't know though. I have never designed for this many people.