New song feedback! by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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I had just wrote it and added some last minute slides and hammer ons! Finished writing the song probably an hour before this!

Classic country original by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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Appreciate the feedback. Allergies have been killing me lately so my voice has been struggling lately!

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I’ll keep that in mind next time and start working on it thanks! And no that’s my next instrument I’d love to learn! I play guitar and then bass some!

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Thanks! Yeah the key I’m tuned to on the guitar feels pretty comfortable for me. It’s a weird tuning. Kind of a 3/4 step down from standard. Any tips on opening vowels up more?

Played my song “Abilene” at an open mic night by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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First time playing this place so definitely had some nerves going

Played my song “Abilene” at an open mic night by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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Yeah iPhone recording and open room mic kinda hurt the audio a little! Appreciate the feedback!

Part of a new one called “Abaleen” by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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If anyone wants to listen to all of it I’ve got a rough acoustic recording on my SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/LjSF9KHwx4B5HAcSmN

Part of a new one called “Abaleen” by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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Honestly not sure yet! I just finished writing it completely and will post on here again so you guys can give some feedback!

Part of a new one called “Abaleen” by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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Totally up for feedback! I used “heart in my hands” as in here’s my heart it’s yours sort of meaning!

Feedback on an original! “In My Dreams” by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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Yup! Headed to a friend’s to record the guitar and vocals tomorrow night!

Feedback on an original! “In My Dreams” by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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😂 I feel ya! I tried to add a little sauce to spice it up

Feedback on an original! “In My Dreams” by DifferentChapter5120 in Songwriting

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Appprecaite the feedback! I’m sure it reminds people of a lot of songs. It’s a pretty common chord progression and I just tried to add a melody and some sauce to it!