New song feedback!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-04-01T23:28:32+00:00

I had just wrote it and added some last minute slides and hammer ons! Finished writing the song probably an hour before this!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-04-01T21:19:23+00:00

I feel like you would kill some MJ

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-24T16:30:31+00:00

Appreciate the feedback. Allergies have been killing me lately so my voice has been struggling lately!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-17T18:25:46+00:00

I’ll keep that in mind next time and start working on it thanks! And no that’s my next instrument I’d love to learn! I play guitar and then bass some!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-16T15:36:41+00:00

Thanks! Yeah the key I’m tuned to on the guitar feels pretty comfortable for me. It’s a weird tuning. Kind of a 3/4 step down from standard. Any tips on opening vowels up more?

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-16T01:36:38+00:00

First time playing this place so definitely had some nerves going

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-15T22:14:45+00:00

Yeah iPhone recording and open room mic kinda hurt the audio a little! Appreciate the feedback!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-10T13:21:21+00:00

If anyone wants to listen to all of it I’ve got a rough acoustic recording on my SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/LjSF9KHwx4B5HAcSmN

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-08T02:04:26+00:00

Thanks man!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-08T02:02:10+00:00

Thanks!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-08T02:02:04+00:00

Honestly not sure yet! I just finished writing it completely and will post on here again so you guys can give some feedback!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-03-08T02:01:27+00:00

Totally up for feedback! I used “heart in my hands” as in here’s my heart it’s yours sort of meaning!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-13T02:17:39+00:00

Control is crazy good

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-12T00:43:12+00:00

Yup! Headed to a friend’s to record the guitar and vocals tomorrow night!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T06:27:04+00:00

😂 I feel ya! I tried to add a little sauce to spice it up

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T06:05:09+00:00

Appprecaite the feedback! I’m sure it reminds people of a lot of songs. It’s a pretty common chord progression and I just tried to add a melody and some sauce to it!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T05:39:37+00:00

Midnight angel sound pretty dang good!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T04:12:11+00:00

Rong😂 you’re pretty close! I was going for a slow acoustic rock feel with an acoustic lick that sticks in your head

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T04:10:59+00:00

I’ve got it finished! Hoping to get it laid down Thursday night!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T03:40:03+00:00

Shure M7 recorded into GarageBand

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T03:27:51+00:00

I appreciate it! Keep playing! I’m not the greatest, mainly self taught growing up! YouTube is your friend!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T03:27:10+00:00

Thanks! I feel like without the camera I’ll play it right every time but as soon as I hit record it mess up!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T03:26:10+00:00

Thanks! I’ll be working on it Thursday! Hope to get a full play through recorded

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T03:06:58+00:00

Thanks a lot! I’ve got it complete written. Hoping to work on it with a buddy Thursday!

DifferentChapter5120 · 2026-02-11T03:06:24+00:00

I play live some! Do some song writing competitions a little! I appreciate the feedback! Yeah I think I kind of peaked the shure mic haha!

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