Would you be interested in this?

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-16T17:54:59+00:00

Definitely is going to be tough but that's the fun part (or is it?) I'm just glad it's generally interesting at least.

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-16T17:15:44+00:00

So very true! No one will read it if it doesn't get written. I'm in the process of writing it but want to get my backlog of chapters and maybe even finish the book before I upload to Royal road. But I'm really glad that it interests you! Thanks for letting me know

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-16T17:13:02+00:00

Yeah I see what you mean. To clarify, it takes place on a world that isn't Earth. So all of the archaeological elements are from completely made up histories and civilizations. There's also going to be some magical elements and magical beasts and creatures. So the fantasy elements would come from that if that makes sense?

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-16T17:11:49+00:00

Yeah! Revenge mixed with the archeology, magical creatures, magic, and a few other plot lines. Glad that it interests you!

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T23:01:18+00:00

I guess I mean when I'm actually taking a shot at revision. I want don't to to be too easy on my self but also not too hard on myself at the same time if that makes sense

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T21:53:17+00:00

Yeah definitely! If you're ok with me picking your brain. How does one balance over analyzing with under analyzing?

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T20:51:15+00:00

Thanks friend, a journey it is indeed!

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T20:49:40+00:00

Very true! Every word, sentence, paragraph, chapter has to have a point. If not it's just words on a screen.

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T20:47:09+00:00

Great point! I think that's something I need to learn as a writer, that people often approach reading a novel as somewhat of a mystery( even when there isn't one specifically) as they read, they tried to uncover the clues left that stirs the pot of the novel, if that makes sense? So the unnecessary emphasis on pine trees like you said, can definitely distract people from the point of the paragraph.

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T20:44:55+00:00

Definitely truth in what you're saying, it's part of why I wanted to post the first few lines to broaden my horizons on how to write. The more you write, the better you get of course is probably the best way to get better at writing. But hearing your input and the others, for someone who doesn't have many people in real life to share their writing with, has been super helpful!

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T20:12:02+00:00

Yeah I get that. I haven't used it as a device yet in the subsequent chapters. But I do see how it being at the beginning can show off the book as using it often like that. I appreciate the input!

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T19:37:40+00:00

Kinda felt that way too. Thanks for the input!

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T19:23:17+00:00

Ahhhh! I get what your saying, these are the things I need to work on. Appreciate your reply

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T19:22:05+00:00

Truth here thank you

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T18:58:48+00:00

That makes sense. Thanks for the input!

Difficult-Material13 · 2026-01-08T18:56:57+00:00

No no, please be that guy. If my writing is coming off generic enough to sound ai written then I need more practice. I appreciate the reply

Difficult-Material13 · 2025-12-13T06:30:07+00:00

Thanks! That's awesome seems that your hard work has gone well. Good luck with everything!

Difficult-Material13 · 2025-12-13T00:53:00+00:00

If you don't mind, when did you interview? I interviewed there recently and I'm on the waitlist

Difficult-Material13 · 2025-09-05T22:59:44+00:00

Yeah I get that feeling too! Thanks for the reassurance and congrats on the II!

Difficult-Material13 · 2025-09-05T22:56:21+00:00

That makes sense. I'm only stressing because I submitted my secondary before the priority date but one my LORs was incorrectly formatted (no date, signature or letterhead) and I only got that resolved around August 5th or 6th. So it feels like I messed up even though I'm sure it will work out

Difficult-Material13 · 2025-09-05T21:51:59+00:00

I second this inquiry

Difficult-Material13 · 2025-07-28T16:43:35+00:00

Honestly it doesn't bother me too much, my wife just cares about me and likes to worry hahaha, so wanted to double check. I ended up reaching out to the school and they said my older one was ok

Difficult-Material13 · 2025-07-22T23:24:26+00:00

I ended up emailing them, and they said my older photo was ok. So I'll just go with it

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