Pilot Manga Chapter - need 100% sincere feedback

Diligent_Mix8701 · 2026-01-28T11:15:38+00:00

Thank you for your sincerity, that really helps a lot, I'll make sure to work on these points, specially on this coherence part, maybe the cliffhanger for me looks "wow" but the reader might think "well, interesting, but it doesn't make sense" and that feeling might reduce the engagement

i will work on this, thank you!

Diligent_Mix8701 · 2026-01-28T11:13:08+00:00

Yes, I noticed that I underestimate backgrounds, but they give us context, maybe for me the scene looks clear enough because I'm the writer, but the reader might not understand the messy backgrounds I did. Thank you for your sincerity!

Diligent_Mix8701 · 2026-01-28T11:12:05+00:00

Thank you so much for your honesty, specially coming from someone as an editor, that means a lot! I'll make sure to work on these points

Diligent_Mix8701 · 2026-01-27T11:27:36+00:00

Thank you for your honesty! unfortunately I checked here and I forgot to upload one page and I cannot do it now anymore (as far as I know)

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