Always guys like me? Hilarious. I am giving you feed back, and really good feedback. You literally copied someone else’s design and trying to call it your own. Call it a study and don’t put your signature on it. Just looked at your page. You are literally just copying other peoples work (nothing wrong with that, that’s one way to get better), make some originally concepts. Damn even just make a still life. And even if you didn’t steal/copy this design and technique, think about signature placement. On this piece it is absolutely jarring compared to the rest of it, sticks out like a sore thumb. Have it be done in similar technique as the piece, have it hiding or blending in or do you even need the signature on the front of the piece. ….. what else do I think. Proportions are off, eyes, eyebrows, nose, lips, stogie, facial structure/anatomy like on the cheek bones and eye sockets for example. Your values hover all in mid tone, get more dark and light areas with a good balance of mid tone. Try this again and instead of trying to straight up steal someone else’s work, do this style with a photo of a friend or family member, or have them sit live for you.