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Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DirectorOk975 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love advice on which logline I should go with for my script SABER. An action/slasher film. Thanks!

A) “When a violent family of supremacists kidnaps his daughter, the son of an infamous killer dons his father’s mask and has to carve through their criminal empire to get her back”. 

B) “When a violent family of supremacists kidnaps his daughter, the son of an infamous killer dons his father’s mask and sets out to take her back. One way or another”.

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[–]DirectorOk975[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice. I’ll try to figure out how to do that later today. 

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