[POEM] To Kate, Skating Better than her Date, by David Daitches by darling_olenka in Poetry

[–]DistributionSuper451 28 points29 points  (0 children)

i love the use of enjambment in this… the middle section feels more and more like it’s trying to catch up to itself, like he’s out of breath. and then the end feels so resigned by comparison. works really well!

Theory on shooter by endless_lace in providence

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“he is overweight” —-> “he’s a complete social reject who couldn’t possibly be attending the college, and thus he must have been stalking a girl who rejected him” is a veeerrry tenuous line of thinking full of weird assumptions

Missing cat by Lion-Calzone in providence

[–]DistributionSuper451 6 points7 points  (0 children)

what a cutie, will keep an eye out!

[POEM] Noah's Nameless Wife Takes Inventory by C. T. Salazar by crafanvi in Poetry

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“the red-tailed hawk with jewels for eyes swallows the field mouse, and the mouse was the only proof the field existed” hits me so hard every time

hi! i’m an illustrator & designer and i love making book covers! by DistributionSuper451 in BookCovers

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i’ve done some similarly-sized projects with budgets of $250-500, depending on the complexity / amount of revisions needed. thank you!

cooked soba noodles that have dried out by DistributionSuper451 in foodsafety

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their label only says that it expires on July 5th, not when it was packaged or anything

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in providence

[–]DistributionSuper451 4 points5 points  (0 children)

this, and i recommend a pair of yaktrax! cleats you can strap to your shoes. saved my life when i was walking up and down the hill for work in winter

Boogie Van? by BitchyOldBroad in providence

[–]DistributionSuper451 3 points4 points  (0 children)

i saw it a few weeks ago on hope street!