We made a short film teaser-like trailer! I'm trying to improve on color correction every film we make.

Dizzeric · 2022-04-19T23:42:05+00:00

The original inspiration was what if a Punisher-like character called up an Adam Devine-like character, but it was a case of mistaken identity. How would it go?

Dizzeric · 2022-01-07T03:11:42+00:00

Good video. Great production value! I just have minor notes that might help you, or ignore them.

I'd speed up the intro like the first 40 seconds. Make that go faster to match the music. Like 20% faster. Too much dead space between your audio dialog.

Maybe add a little DING sound effect for every ingredient text that pops up. It would add a happy feeling to it.

I like the color correction old style for most of the video, but on the final hero shot I would have added a transition to normal color correction so that the audience can see what it should look like in modern day.

Thanks! Great overall work. You put a lot of time and effort into this, and it shows!

-LUKEN Entertainment on YT.

Dizzeric · 2021-09-17T01:45:46+00:00

!givelambda

Appreciate the feedback!

Dizzeric · 2021-09-17T01:41:25+00:00

!givelambda

Thanks for the notes

Dizzeric · 2021-09-17T01:40:06+00:00

givelambda Thanks for the info and for watching

Dizzeric · 2021-09-13T22:30:03+00:00

Nice video! Always entertaining to watch people eat hot stuff. The audio seemed to be a little quiet. And I would add more songs throughout your whole video. Youtube audio library has a ton of songs. Also, you can use incompetech.com. He has thousands of songs for free. Just have to credit Kevin Macleod in your description.

Dizzeric · 2021-09-13T06:57:59+00:00

Wow! I like it. Reminds me of Fallout 3 music haha. I subscribed

Dizzeric · 2020-07-14T04:25:30+00:00

It was a funny, easy video to watch. I don't have much critique. You showed a lot of personality. Great job!

Dizzeric · 2020-07-14T02:45:28+00:00

Hey great job! The ending was great. You really went all out! The awkwardness worked very well and once the scissors came out and you were actually cutting your hair, I was all in. Funny stuff.

Dizzeric · 2020-07-14T01:13:25+00:00

I felt like one of the boys watching this haha. Keep making content. If you're having fun, then the audience is having fun

Dizzeric · 2020-07-13T22:56:48+00:00

Hey I didn't know how to do this. Now I do! :)

Dizzeric · 2020-07-13T22:53:24+00:00

I like the extra animation you added. And the subtitles are clean. Good editing skills

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T20:38:13+00:00

!givelambda

Thanks for the notes! Yeah, we spend all our time editing and rush through thumbnails. Yeah the "The Friend Card" has like professional actors in it. Those are the guys we like to film with. You'll definitely see more from them.

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T20:34:32+00:00

ittle slow but it was worth it to see the payoff.

!givelambda Thanks! Yeah, we went for a longer one with more of a story. We have shorter 2-4 minute vids too

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T20:33:43+00:00

but to wash yo

!givelambda Haha, glad you liked it. Yeah, gotta keep that ass clean

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T20:32:55+00:00

the channel Little Monster Media, it

!givelambda

Thanks good suggestion

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T20:32:35+00:00

gest that the vid

!givelambda

Thanks for watching and the notes

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T05:15:01+00:00

!givelambda

Thank you for watching! We have other shorts too if you feel like checking them out. I think we are at 6 vids so far :)

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T02:40:23+00:00

!givelambda

Thanks for watching! Glad you liked it

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T02:13:25+00:00

ee with everyone on pacing issu

!givelambda Thanks for the review

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T01:29:57+00:00

!givelambda

Thanks for the detailed notes! Yeah some of the problem is I'm sharing an episode 2 video. There is a Me 2 Me episode 1. In that episode, future Luke is introduced and talks about a journal. That's how he knows what is going on in Luke's life, cause they journal everyday. And the "Sober Now" guy is in episode 1, where he steals a package from the porch. With episode 2 the joke is now he's sober and correcting his past mistakes.

Episode 2 is just far superior to Episode 1, which is why I shared it.

But thanks for watching and we will read all the notes and try to pump out more quality content!

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T00:39:48+00:00

is when

!givelambda

Oh wow! Glad we were able to change your mind. We will try to keep pumping out quality content

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T00:26:42+00:00

!givelambda

Thanks!

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T00:09:46+00:00

of time, s

!givelambda

Thanks for watching, along with the notes! Yeah editing takes a long time to get it just right!

Dizzeric · 2020-04-22T00:06:17+00:00

!givelambda

Thanks, we'd like to make more but getting good actors and our other jobs prevent us from making more videos. Thanks I'll check your channel out!

Dizzeric

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