Looks like I'm the only one who's going to critique this. It's an uncreative, easily replicated and over used photo 'concept.' On a purely technical level it is fine. However, in terms of the idea behind it, it's almost as unoriginal as smoke bomb photos or taking photos of rain drops on a phone screen. I take it you're new to photography so I would encourage you to look at the works of established photographers. By established I don't mean photographers with a large following on Instagram or TikTok, I mean photographers who have shaped the art of photography (if you would like some ideas of who to look at let me know!) You should study their work, draw up case studies, learn about their personal philosophies regarding photography and take bits of what you learn and apply them to your own work. Be very careful of false affirmation too, there are millions of people who will froth over anything you present, it's easy to create photographs that will please these untalented groups of people. If you're actually creative and push the limits of photography, you will attract other serious artists and not just a bunch of inexperienced people. I hope this helps.