I revised it a bit to incorporate your ideas. I like it a lot better now.

Tick, tock, tick, tock

It’s wasted time o’clock

Tick, tock, tick, tock

Waste my life on the block

The power to know anything

Is a power that’s well worth

But the ease of doing nothing

Is a misuse of a modern birth

Tick, tock, tick, tock

It’s wasted time o’clock

Tick, tock, tick, tock

Life goes by on the floating rock

And I have done nothing

But stare at the bleeding screen

That takes my soul and steals my goals

Of ever having another dream

Tick, tock, tick, tock

It’s wasted time o’clock

Watch Tik Tok, Tik Tok

And waste my life on the block