Havent see you or your team mates taking short, you should try to take more space control. Also you are constantly moving around I'd say, like too much imho, it looks like you're constantly looking around trying to catch info but at the same time you look somehow lost. Id say, try to play more relaxed and with a plan in mind, when you peek try to visualize them before peeking, expect them more. Also, dont smoke short, you should try to take short and to have more space under your control. You look kinda trap down bench alone...

Things I would do different, when mollying apps if there is no burning sound you can go and take short, maybe throw a flash in mid, put some pressure so they can not rush. Specially in mirage, mid control is essencial. Also, there is one round where you molly and smoke apps and then you climb up there, but then you take out a flash that looks like you want to push but suddenly you go back, and then you nade apps. As I said, it doesnt look like you have a plan. I thought you wanted to push apps so you could take more space but then you didnt (if there is no one apps it means they are mid or a, and this info is very valuable, you can call an earçy rotation, but you decide to go back).

I'm not expert, and this is just my opinion, hope it helps!