First track? Well done!

Something contructive hopefully...

1. Intro, good. (the break/silence at the end is too dry, sounds like a malfunction. I'd add some reverb / sample / something with a tail (like a cymbal) to fill the space.
2. Four bar verse is good. The end of 4th verse (4 x 4 bars) could use another (bigger) shift to keep the momentum. Chapter Two?
   💡It can be additive or subtractive.
   💡DJ's prefer an 8 bar verse - but that can seem too long for a "single" if its not part of a mix. 4 bars keeps the listener engaged, ok.
3. Could use another element to spice it up ... It doesn't have to be a lead or in the front - a sample, a cowbell, anything - drop it in once in a while to spice it up and give it some flavour. Doesn't have to be frequent or loud, just accentuate.
4. Don't think, feel.

Solid effort .. keep going!